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PBParty Entry #10: My Earth Has A Voice

March 24, 2024 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2024 22 Comments

GENRE: **Native American, Diverse, Lyrical


WORDS: 393


Query:

Agents and Editors,

Feel the heartbeat of the earth.
Hear the whispers of feathered friends on quiet mornings.
Listen to the cries leaving behind a trail of tears.

Discover the enchanting melodies of nature and the resilient spirit of First American peoples in MY EARTH HAS A VOICE. Through the seasons, hear the symphony of the earth and the echoes of its stories. A beautiful masterpiece of love, life, and resilience awaits. At 393 words, MY EARTH HAS A VOICE is a lyrical unfolding of the voices of Earth through the eyes of First American people similar to WE ARE WATER PROTECTORS along with a comparable feel to FRY BREAD, A NATIVE AMERICAN FAMILY STORY. With a gentle highlight of the removal from our homelands spread throughout, this book is for readers aged 4-8.

I live in Oklahoma (former Indian Territory) with my wife, son, and puppy named Teddy which are all First American—except for Teddy, of course. By day, I work for the Chickasaw Nation in the Culture and Humanities Department. I am a picture book writer, SCBWI member, 2022 #PBparty Finalist, and member of Oklahoma Writers’ Federation. My writing has won honorable mention in various Kidlit contests, including Rate Your Story annual contests and Fall Writing Frenzy, and I recently sold a First American picture book to a small PAL children’s press.

Thank you for your time and consideration.


Excerpt:

My Earth whispers a song only the heart can hear.
On quiet mornings, a soft hum of the wind joins a chorus of feathered friends, sharing stories of our homelands.
In early evenings, disappearing sunlight paints the sky in hues of orange and pink.
“Goodnight,” whispers the sun.
A farewell that carries the memory of sunset ceremonies performed in our native lands.


What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

Because of my Native heritage, I am always inspired to share stories of survival and resilience. I believe the current focus on diverse stories and underrepresented voices create a unique opportunity for children to learn important aspects of the world AND PEOPLE around them. I was specifically inspired by a hike in the woods, taking in the sounds, smells, and atmosphere that could be highlighted with a First American voice through a picture book.

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  • Lindsay Auld
    · Reply

    March 25, 2024 at 5:52 AM

    I’d love to read more of MY EARTH HAS A VOICE and you’re welcome to send the full manuscript to me via email. Thank you, and I look forward to hearing from you!

  • Becca Langton
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    March 25, 2024 at 5:56 AM

    This excerpt is beautiful – please do query me at becca@darleyanderson.com

  • Lisa Amstutz
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    March 25, 2024 at 8:41 AM

    I’d love to read more! Please feel free to query me at QueryManager.com/2006/PBParty. Thank you!

  • Kaitlyn L Sanchez
    · Reply

    March 25, 2024 at 9:46 AM

    Gorgeous! I’d love to consider this beautiful story and up to two more of your wonderful stories. Mindy will share submission info soon! Thank you for sharing your lovely words with the world.

  • Michele McAvoy
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    March 25, 2024 at 9:56 AM

    I would love see to the full query/story. If you are interested, please follow our submission guidelines at http://www.littlepresspublishing.com/submissions (no need to provide comps)- email littlepresspublishing@gmail.com

  • Joyce Sweeney
    · Reply

    March 25, 2024 at 10:02 AM

    I would love to take a look at this as well!

  • Lynnette Novak
    · Reply

    March 25, 2024 at 11:03 AM

    I would love to see this! Please paste the query in the body of the email as well at pitches for other projects you might have available. Attach the MS as a Word document, write “#PB Party 2024 Request” in the subject line, and email to: lynnette@theseymouragency.com. Please only submit to one Seymour Agency agent at a time. Thanks!

  • Christie Megill
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    March 25, 2024 at 8:06 PM

    Hello! I’d love to read more of your work! If you’re interested, please send your materials to cmegill@catagencyinc.com with PB Party (or something similar) in the subject line. Thank you!

  • Karly Dizon
    · Reply

    March 26, 2024 at 1:53 AM

    Yes! Yep! MORE!!! These are the works that need to be shared and culture that should be celebrated.

    If you think we’d be a good fit, please reach out to Mindy who has my submission email.

  • Deidra Purvis
    · Reply

    March 26, 2024 at 12:31 PM

    I’d love to read your full manuscript! If interested in submitting to Free Spirit Publishing, please use Submittable: https://freespiritpublishing.submittable.com/submit/134906/free-spirit-submissions. Name PBParty in your submission title and cover letter, and I’ll prioritize the review of this submission. Thanks!

  • Alex Gehringer
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    March 26, 2024 at 1:33 PM

    Very eager to read your complete script and any other writing you have in the works. Looking forward to connecting -A

    alex@thebrightagency.com

  • Ainslie Campbell-Schwartz
    · Reply

    March 26, 2024 at 3:31 PM

    I would love to read this one!

  • Feather Flores
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    March 26, 2024 at 4:54 PM

    This sounds fabulous! I’d love to see it on submission when you’ve signed with an agent (regardless of how long that may take—my enthusiasm will not wane 😊). Keeping all my fingers crossed for you!

    x Feather

  • Kristina Sutton Salazar Lennon
    · Reply

    March 26, 2024 at 5:14 PM

    How moving! I’d love to see more. I am in Oklahoma as well! Please send the full manuscript and if you have another ms you’d like to send, I am eager to read additional material. Thank you!

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  • Elizabeth Schleisman
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    March 27, 2024 at 12:46 PM

    This is beautiful! I would love to read the rest of your book. If you’d like to submit to Beaming Books, please email me at schleismane@beamingbooks.com.

  • Sally Kim
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    March 27, 2024 at 7:08 PM

    Beautiful! Please submit the full manuscript here: https://querymanager.com/query/sallyabla and note “PBParty” in the referral section so I know to prioritize it. Thanks!

  • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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    March 27, 2024 at 7:55 PM

    Editor request for you. Wahoooo!

    Josh Gregory says: I’d be very interested in seeing this manuscript. Mindy will let you know how to reach out to me directly anytime if you are interested in submitting your work to Albert Whitman.

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  • Erin Casey Westin
    · Reply

    March 28, 2024 at 6:35 PM

    I’d like to see this story! If you want to share with me, please query me at this event specific link: QueryManager.com/erincaseywestin/PBParty

  • Esty Loveing-Downes
    · Reply

    April 1, 2024 at 8:43 AM

    OMG, yes – Beautiful and evocative. I’d love to be see this manuscript, please!
    https://querymanager.com/query/ArtHouseLitSubmissions

  • Hilary Harwell
    · Reply

    April 2, 2024 at 9:10 AM

    Hi there! I’d love to see the full manuscript – please send a query and word doc attachment to hilaryquery at ktliterary.com. Thanks!

  • Michelle Jackson
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    April 10, 2024 at 9:56 PM

    I would love to see this manuscript
    :). Please query met at: https://querymanager.com/app/settings/#:~:text=https%3A//QueryManager.com/LCSLiteraryServices

  • Michelle Jackson
    · Reply

    April 10, 2024 at 10:00 PM

    I would love to see this. Query me at https://QueryManager.com/LCSLiteraryServices

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