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PBParty Entry #14 : The Nod

March 24, 2024 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2024 8 Comments

GENRE: **Diverse, Character Driven


WORDS: 435


Query:

I’m contacting you because of the interest in fresh new voices and perspectives underrepresented in literature. I have written a four hundred thirty-five-word picture book, The Nod. The book is intended for children four to eight years old.

An inquisitive eight-year-old boy experiences the power of the “nod” and the history of this simple gesture in the African-American community from his Daddy and PopPop. Like Crown: An Ode to a Fresh Cut and Soul Food Sunday, The Nod presents a subtle but impactful tradition passed down from generation to generation in the African-American community as a way of asking, “Bruh are you okay?”

I am a member of SCBWI and Black Creators Headquarters. I co-wrote a picture book, Family Reunion, that was published June 2021 by Barefoot Books. My goal is to tell stories kids of color, specifically, African American boys, can see themselves and their experiences on the pages of a book. I want them to say, “Yup, I matter.”

If you have any questions, don’t hesitate to contact me. Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to hearing from you.


Excerpt:

Up and down.
Never left to right. Or right to left.
Daddy gives a nod of his head to strangers.
But why?

I understand saying hello or hi.
Asking what’s up?
Or even a fist bump. Not too hard or too light.
But a head nod?

“Daddy, who was that man?”
“Nico, I don’t know but I do.”

Some folks are double nodders
Two shakes of the head.


What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

When my children were younger, they would always ask me who a man was after I threw him a head nod. I would shrug my shoulders and say, “I don’t know.” They would look like a confused puppy. As I thought about it, I learned about this tradition from watching my dad and older brother (who by the way is the master of the double head nod). My writing will always reflect the black experience and I hope it will provide a glimpse for all into African-American culture.

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  • Kaitlyn L Sanchez
    · Reply

    March 25, 2024 at 9:51 AM

    This sounds like a great story; I’d love to consider this and up to two other stories you’d like to share. Mindy will be in touch with submission info soon!

  • Deidra Purvis
    · Reply

    March 26, 2024 at 12:36 PM

    I love this! If interested in sending to Free Spirit Publishing, please submit your full manuscript use Submittable: https://freespiritpublishing.submittable.com/submit/134906/free-spirit-submissions. Name PBParty in your submission title and cover letter, and I’ll prioritize the review of this submission. Thanks!

  • Ainslie Campbell-Schwartz
    · Reply

    March 26, 2024 at 3:36 PM

    I would love to see this one!

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  • Feather Flores
    · Reply

    March 26, 2024 at 4:59 PM

    This sounds fabulous! I’d love to see it on submission when you’ve signed with an agent (regardless of how long that may take—my enthusiasm will not wane 😊). Keeping all my fingers crossed for you!

    x Feather

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  • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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    March 27, 2024 at 7:56 PM

    Editor request for you. Wahoooo!

    Josh Gregory says: I’d be very interested in seeing this manuscript. Mindy will let you know how to reach out to me directly anytime if you are interested in submitting your work to Albert Whitman.

  • Adam Blackman
    · Reply

    March 29, 2024 at 9:04 AM

    Hi. I’d love to see this. Please submit through the Cardinal Rule Press website using the Agented form. In the Agent Name field, enter PB Party Request. Thanks!

  • Hilary Harwell
    · Reply

    April 2, 2024 at 9:12 AM

    Hi there! I’d love to see the full manuscript – please send a query and word doc attachment to hilaryquery at ktliterary.com. Thanks!

  • Mara Cobb
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    April 2, 2024 at 6:28 PM

    I would love to see the full manuscript–stories with narratives such as this are so important to my mission as an agent! Please submit via the link below if you would like to share (and be sure to mention PBParty!) 🙂 https://QueryManager.com/Mara_Cobb_Query_Link

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