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PBParty Entry #15: A Whole New Ball Game

March 24, 2024 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2024 6 Comments

GENRE: Non-Fiction


WORDS: 700


Query:

Dear PB Party Hosts,

It was the summer of 1994, and twenty-one women were about to change the game of baseball forever…

Attached please find my 700-word picture book, A WHOLE NEW BALL GAME, the true story of the Colorado Silver Bullets —the first women’s professional baseball team to compete against men.

The facts in this manuscript were reviewed by four players from the 1994 team, and I interviewed all four of them as well.

I’m an elementary teacher, an active member/volunteer for the Eastern NY region of SCBWI, and a #PBChat Mentee in 2022. As a baseball fan growing up in the 90s, I avidly followed the Colorado Silver Bullets. Although I never got to play for them as I had hoped, I’m thrilled that I’ve been able to bring their story to life in this picture book.

A WHOLE NEW BALL GAME is my debut picture book. It combines the determination in World Cup Women by Meg Walters, with women in sports breaking down barriers like in Breaking the Ice by Angie Bullaro.

Thank you for your time and consideration.


Excerpt:

For decades, men crowded the diamond and the dugouts.
Women weren’t welcome on the baseball field.
People said they couldn’t catch or pitch,
couldn’t compete,
weren’t strong enough to play.

But in the summer of 1994, everything changed…

From California to the New York island, they arrived—
Softball all-stars.
College heroes.
All-Americans.
The best of the best.
Twenty-one women, ready to play ball.

Batter up.


What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

When I was growing up in the 90s, I lived and breathed baseball—and softball, stickball, wiffleball, or any form of the game. So, when a new professional all-female team had been formed to compete against minor league men’s teams, I was thrilled! Dreaming of playing professional baseball was not just a fantasy anymore. It was an actual, tangible goal. Although I never did get to play for them, the opportunity that existed was so impactful for me, it inspired me to share their story in this book.

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  • Joyce Sweeney
    · Reply

    March 25, 2024 at 10:07 AM

    I’d love to see this!

  • Elisa Houot
    · Reply

    March 25, 2024 at 1:08 PM

    Hi! I’d love to read more! If you’d like to query me, you can use this link and upload your full manuscript: QueryManager.com/ElisaHouot/PBParty
    I look forward to reading.
    Best,
    Elisa Houot, agent at The Seymour Agency

  • Christie Megill
    · Reply

    March 25, 2024 at 8:22 PM

    Hello! I’d love to read this manuscript. If you’re interested, please send your materials to cmegill@catagencyinc.com with PB Party (or something similar) in the subject line. Thank you!

  • Ainslie Campbell-Schwartz
    · Reply

    March 26, 2024 at 3:37 PM

    I would love to see this one!!

  • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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    March 27, 2024 at 7:57 PM

    Editor request for you. Wahoooo!

    Josh Gregory says: I’d be very interested in seeing this manuscript. Mindy will let you know how to reach out to me directly anytime if you are interested in submitting your work to Albert Whitman.

  • Erin Casey Westin
    · Reply

    March 28, 2024 at 6:36 PM

    I’d like to see this story! If you want to share with me, please query me at this event specific link: QueryManager.com/erincaseywestin/PBParty

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