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PBParty Entry #17 : The Edgecomb Jar

March 10, 2025 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2025 24 Comments

GENRE: *Diverse, Lyrical, Historical Fiction


WORDS: 276


Query:

Hello,

I am submitting my 276-word manuscript, THE EDGECOMB JAR, for your consideration.
THE EDGECOMB JAR is a lyrical story that reflects Texas history since Emancipation through the tale of a stoneware jar. From a place of honor, protecting a family’s food, the jar is repurposed many times before landing in a junk shop. Filled with a belief in its intrinsic value, THE EDGECOMB JAR holds on to hope as it bears witness to history.

Back matter highlights the five emancipated potters who formed the first Black-owned business in Texas while explaining the importance of stoneware in food preservation. Comparable books: * I Am the Subway* (inanimate narrator); Dave the Potter: Artist, Poet, Slave.

Like the jar, I’ve had many homes: nineteen, scattered across four continents. I’ve been a New York banker and a refugee camp English teacher. Currently I split my time between Seattle and Dallas and write for a small business magazine. As a museum volunteer, I often pose what-if questions to help children engage and see themselves in art. THE EDGECOMB JAR shows how something little can have a big impact. It reminds us that everyone has a story worth hearing.

I hold a BA in American Studies from Wellesley College. Two of my prize-winning short stories have been published in anthologies by Owl Canyon Press. I’m a member of SCBWI, 12×12, and the Writer’s League of Texas. Thank you for taking the time to read this submission.


Excerpt:

[museum]
I was born in Texas of fire and water, sweat and clay.

The last of my siblings, I stand proud: knee high, slim hips, broad shoulders, glistening brown. Useful. Beautiful…And often overlooked.

“It’s just a jar.”

But I’ve been sung over, prayed over.
Chipped by children, played over.

Left behind and sold.
Again,
and again,
and again. [junk shop]


What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

This story was inspired by a collection of small, speckled brown stoneware jars that sat in a nook in Bayou Bend, the museum where I volunteered. People walked by without noticing, and I felt sorry for the jars. I know what it’s like to be ignored – having moved so many times, I’ve often stood on the sidelines, hoping to be seen. After researching their history, I highlighted the jars on every tour, and the idea for this story was born.

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  • Michelle Witte
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 2:30 AM

    I’d be happy to take a look at the full manuscript. You can submit it at https://QueryTracker.net/query/michellewitte/PBParty.

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    • enthusiasticallysilly7cc4b52c25
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      March 11, 2025 at 2:41 PM

      Thank you, done!

  • Katie Erickson
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    March 10, 2025 at 10:21 AM

    I’d like to see the full. You can submit it at: https://QueryTracker.net/query/KatieErickson/PBParty!

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    • enthusiasticallysilly7cc4b52c25
      · Reply

      March 11, 2025 at 2:41 PM

      Thank you, done.

  • Joyce Sweeney
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    March 10, 2025 at 10:27 AM

    Very intrigued. Please send me the full as a word doc attachment.

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    • enthusiasticallysilly7cc4b52c25
      · Reply

      March 11, 2025 at 11:39 AM

      Thank you, Joyce. Sent.

  • Natascha Morris
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    March 10, 2025 at 12:09 PM

    I’m intrigued to see how the full develops. Please send your full here: https://QueryTracker.net/query/natascha

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    • enthusiasticallysilly7cc4b52c25
      · Reply

      March 11, 2025 at 3:08 PM

      Thank you, done.

  • Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez
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    March 10, 2025 at 12:09 PM

    This is interesting and so sweet. I’d be delighted to read the full and feel free to send up to two other stories you love as well to this link: https://QueryTracker.net/query/2049/PBParty Thank you for sharing your work with us!

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    • enthusiasticallysilly7cc4b52c25
      · Reply

      March 11, 2025 at 10:59 PM

      Thank you for the opportunity to submit three stories. Done!

  • Sheila Fernley
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    March 10, 2025 at 2:31 PM

    Congratulations on being a 2025 PBParty finalist! I would love to see this complete manuscript! Please submit this project to the following link by Midnight Eastern, March 31, 2025: https://QueryTracker.net/query/Sheila_Fernley/PBParty

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    • enthusiasticallysilly7cc4b52c25
      · Reply

      March 11, 2025 at 11:47 PM

      Thank you, Sheila. Done.

  • Ariana Philips
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    March 11, 2025 at 11:40 AM

    I’d like to see the full manuscript! Please send the full manusript to aphilips@jvnla.com with PBParty in the subject line.

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    • enthusiasticallysilly7cc4b52c25
      · Reply

      March 12, 2025 at 8:27 PM

      Thank you, Ariana. Done.

    • enthusiasticallysilly7cc4b52c25
      · Reply

      March 12, 2025 at 11:14 PM

      Thank you, done!

  • Helen Masvikeni
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    March 12, 2025 at 1:38 AM

    YES! I absolutely want to see this manuscript. Please send it my way—I can’t wait to dive in! Send your pitch and word document to Helenquery@megibowliterary.com. Please title it PBParty and the name of your book. Can’t wait!

    • enthusiasticallysilly7cc4b52c25
      · Reply

      March 12, 2025 at 8:28 PM

      Thank you, Helen. Done.

  • Elizabeth Schleisman
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    March 12, 2025 at 11:02 AM

    I’d love to read the rest of this! If you’re interested in publishing with Beaming Books, please send my way at schleismane@beamingbooks.com. Please title it PBParty and the name of your book.

    • enthusiasticallysilly7cc4b52c25
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      March 12, 2025 at 8:29 PM

      Thank you so much! Done.

  • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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    March 14, 2025 at 3:21 PM

    Rick Margolis at Rising Bear Literary Agency would love to see more! Please paste your pitch and the entire manuscript into the body of an email. I’ll share more details with you.

    Congrats! 😊

    • enthusiasticallysilly7cc4b52c25
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      March 15, 2025 at 11:27 PM

      Thank you MIndy, I have not received your email instructions yet, awaiting eagerly. You are an amazing person!

    • enthusiasticallysilly7cc4b52c25
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      March 17, 2025 at 10:56 AM

      Whoops, I figured it out and have been in touch with Rick.

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  • Kathleen Merz
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    March 22, 2025 at 12:15 AM

    I’d love to take a look at this project! If you’re interested in submitting it to Eerdmans Books for Young Readers, please email the pitch and full manuscript to me at kmerz@eerdmans.com. Make sure to include “PBParty” and the name of your manuscript in the subject line.

    • enthusiasticallysilly7cc4b52c25
      · Reply

      March 22, 2025 at 12:00 PM

      thank you, will do so immediately.

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