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PBParty Entry #2 : Tic, Tic, Stop!

March 20, 2023 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2023 8 Comments

GENRE: *Diverse/Neurodiverse, Character Driven, SEL


WORDS: 380


Query:

Dear PB Party Agents and Editors,

I’m excited to share with you my Own Voices story of a child’s rhythmic, day-in-the-life with Tourette’s Syndrome.

Tap-tap, twitch-twitch, tic-tic, STOP! When a young, Neurodiverse child is frustrated by the rhythms of her tics, she tries her best to mask them. But, when her body becomes overwhelmed and overstimulated, she must find ways to calm her body and brain, and learn to accept the power inside her. A power stronger than any tic.

TIC, TIC, STOP is a 390-word picture book for ages 4-8, with back matter that offers practical ways to cope with tics and Tourette’s Syndrome. Think Elsa’s battle in FROZEN, to, “Conceal, don’t feel, don’t let them know,” mixed with the unexplainable need to move and let it out in WIGGLES, STOMPS AND SQUEEZES CALM MY JITTERS DOWN and SULLIVAN, WHO IS ALWAYS TOO LOUD.

I was diagnosed with Tourette’s Syndrome as a child, and grew up with the constant battle of trying to mask my tics. I wrote this story to show the diversity of tics and coping strategies, all of which are unique to each child.

As a first grade teacher in Washington, DC, my students love to ask, “WHY?” Although I can’t explain why, I can share how. I want every child, tic or no tic, to enter into what it feels like, when your body has a mind of its own, and see how taking care of our body and brain is beneficial to all of us.

I am an active member of SCBWI, Julie Hedlund’s 12 x 12 Picture Book Challenge, multiple critique groups and won PB Party Honorable Mentions in both 2021 and 2022.

Per your submission guidelines, my first 60-ish words are included. Thank you for taking the time to consider my work!


Now that PBParty 2023 is over, the author asked me to remove the sample.


What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

I was inspired to write this story to share my experience dealing with Tourette’s Syndrome as both a child and an adult. Friends, students, and family members ask, “Why are you doing that?” “Are you okay?” Or, comment that they haven’t noticed it. But, I do! My body moves and operates a bit differently, and my hope is for other children to be able to empower themselves, while embracing their tics.

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  • Erin Casey Westin
    · Reply

    March 20, 2023 at 2:57 PM

    I’m so curious to see the rest of this story! If you want to share the manuscript with me, please use this link to query: QueryManager.com/erincaseywestin/PBParty

  • Deidra
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    March 20, 2023 at 3:18 PM

    I would love to read the rest of this story. Please submit your full proposal here:https://freespiritpublishing.submittable.com/submit/134906/free-spirit-submissions and reference #PBParty in your cover letter.

    Based on the topic of this PB, I would also love to talk with you about a nonfiction children’s series I’m working on. If you’re interested, please reach out to me at deidra.purvis@tcmpub.com.

    Thanks, Deidra

  • Emily Keyes
    · Reply

    March 20, 2023 at 3:59 PM

    I would love to see the rest of this manuscript if it is still available. https://querymanager.com/query/EmilyKeyes

  • Josh Gregory
    · Reply

    March 20, 2023 at 4:07 PM

    I’d love to read this. Please feel free to email it to me: jgregory@albertwhitman.com

  • Hilary Harwell
    · Reply

    March 21, 2023 at 11:45 AM

    Hi – I’d love to see the entire manuscript. Please send along with your query to hilaryquery@ktliterary dot com, and paste in the body of the email. Subject: “PBParty Request”… Thank you!

  • Andrea Hall
    · Reply

    March 21, 2023 at 6:48 PM

    I’d love to see the full manuscript. Please submit to me here: https://beamingbooks.submittable.com/submit/7954ccc7-bae9-4f0c-8bc8-a8f3fc45d306/2023-pb-party-submissions

  • Adam Blackman
    · Reply

    March 22, 2023 at 8:55 PM

    Hi. I’d love to see the full manuscript. You can submit using this form: https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSeo0q0RFrtdfMplgyNtun7naO0lJWfEB4wLjhkPBJZ8s3Iihw/viewform, which is also available at the submissions page of http://www.cardinalrulepress.com. In the field for “Agency Name” write in “PBParty Finalist Request.” Thanks!

  • Karly
    · Reply

    April 5, 2023 at 11:58 AM

    Hi, I’d love to see this! If you think we’re a good fit, please send to QueryManager.com/Karly/PBParty

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