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PBParty Entry #25 : Koi Joy

March 10, 2025 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2025 8 Comments

GENRE: **Diverse, Humor, Character Driven


WORDS: 602


Query:

Thank you for your generous offer to participate in PBParty 2025. I am submitting Koi Joy, an intergenerational book that features splashy fish and a koi legend.

Catalina longs for a koi for her new pond, but Abuelito will first test her perseverance. Can she outsmart a school of fish to get her own koi? Koi Joy is perfect for inquisitive fans of How to Eat a Mango and The Girl Who Loves Bugs. My fishy tale was picked as best promising picture book in SCBWI’s 2024 MayFest conference.

I’m a member of the Midwest Pond & Koi Society and enjoy listening to fishy tales. Koi are associated with good luck, prosperity, and perseverance. Market research estimates the koi global market was worth $2.68 billion in 2024. My STEAM book can grace the shelves of libraries, schools, arboretums, zoos and hospitals – any place that has a koi pond. In Vietnam, for example, koi ponds are very popular at cafes.

I’m a Latina author of two nonfiction chapter books: Behind the Scenes of Pro Basketball and Behind the Scenes of Pro Baseball (Capstone, 2019). I’m an award-winning journalist and serve as Assistant Regional Advisor for the Illinois chapter of SCBWI. I’m also a mom of 15, or is it 18 koi? Thank you for reading my fishy entry.


Excerpt:

I’ve asked Abuelito a million times for a baby koi.
But, he always says, “Not now, sweet Catalina. I’m not sure you are ready.”
I dip my fingers into his chilly pond.
Whiskers tickle, scarlet scales sparkle in the sun.
Butterfly fins glide past mis dedos. La Dragóna Dorada says hello.
I’m going to ask again.
First, I help Abuelito with fishy chores.


What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

When we bought our first house, we inherited a pond with several graceful koi. We knew nothing, but fell in love immediately. One of the koi was 50 years old! One morning, when I was trying to figure out how many fish we had, Catalina was born. What would happen if she wanted a baby koi? Her Abuelito would test her because koi parents are very protective, putting up nets and chasing predators. He’d ask her how many fish he had. How would Catalina count moving fish?

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  • Lynnette Novak
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 10:39 AM

    I’m intrigued and would love to see more. Please paste the pitch in the body of the email and attach the MS as a Word document. Send to: lynnette@theseymouragency.com. If another agent from The Seymour Agency requests, please choose ONE agent to submit to at a time.

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  • Lisa Amstutz
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 11:35 AM

    I’d love to see more! Feel free to submit the full manuscript at https://QueryTracker.net/query/2006/PBParty.

  • Emily Keyes
    · Reply

    March 11, 2025 at 1:19 PM

    This sounds fun. Can you submit your query and manuscript to me via this link https://querytracker.net/query/EmilyKeyes/PBParty ?

  • Elizabeth Schleisman
    · Reply

    March 12, 2025 at 11:09 AM

    I’d love to read the rest of this! If you’re interested in publishing with Beaming Books, please send my way at schleismane@beamingbooks.com. Please title it PBParty and the name of your book.

  • Deidra Purvis
    · Reply

    March 12, 2025 at 3:21 PM

    I would love to read more! If interested in publishing with Free Spirit, please submit a full proposal here and name PBParty in your submission title and cover letter: https://freespiritpublishing.submittable.com/submit/134906/free-spirit-submissions.

  • Janine Le
    · Reply

    March 18, 2025 at 9:29 AM

    I’d be interested to read this! Please use the following link to submit:
    https://QueryTracker.net/query/JanineLe/PBParty

  • Janine Le
    · Reply

    March 18, 2025 at 9:32 AM

    I would be interested to read this! Please use the following link to submit:
    https://QueryTracker.net/query/JanineLe/PBParty

  • Janine Le
    · Reply

    March 18, 2025 at 9:36 AM

    Apologies if this request posts multiple times! Doesn’t seem to be going through but I would be happy to read this one. Please use the following link to submit:
    https://QueryTracker.net/query/JanineLe/PBParty

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