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PBParty Entry #26 : City of Murals

March 10, 2025 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2025 15 Comments

GENRE: **Diverse, STEM/STEAM, Informational Fiction


WORDS: 710


Query:

Dear PB Party agents and editors,

A second-generation child from Philadelphia finds inspiration from the murals in her city, but despairs at the unwelcoming wall by the vacant lot on her block. When the wish she makes for that wall takes root, it blooms into something all the neighbors can be proud of. CITY OF MURALS is a 710-word informational fiction picture book manuscript featuring a fictional main character set in the real city of Philadelphia. This story includes themes of immigration, growth, community, belonging, and public art. It’s written for kids ages 4-8 who are inspired by the way murals can transform a city like in MAYBE SOMETHING BEAUTIFUL: HOW ART TRANSFORMED A NEIGHBORHOOD (F. Isabel Campoy, Theresa Howell, & Rafael López, Houghton Mifflin Harcourt, 2016) and who enjoy going along on a child-led tour through a beloved community like in MY PAPI HAS A MOTORCYCLE (Isabel Quintero & Zeke Peña, Kokila, 2019).

Potential back matter includes an author’s note, information on mural making and murals in Philadelphia, a list of the murals referenced, and a list of selected resources. I’ve received permission from local organization, Mural Arts, to access their database of mural images for inclusion in my story.

I’m an Asian-American writer who likes to create characters from my context engaging in their everyday lives. I’m a member of SCBWI, recipient of a 2023 12×12 Picture Book Challenge GOLD scholarship, Blogmaster for the Eastern PA SCBWI, leader of two critique groups for picture book creators, and a board-certified art therapist. I’ve been a Philadelphia resident for over 20 years and have so enjoyed living in a place where murals help breathe life into the cityscape, as well as being a part of that process through participating in Mural Arts community paint days. As the daughter of an immigrant, and in my connection to the new American community in Philadelphia through my art therapy work, the welcoming imagery and messages of many of my city’s murals are especially meaningful to me. I believe that now, more than ever, we need to keep creating books where kids of color can feel seen, and find hope and belonging.

Thank you so much for your time and consideration!


Excerpt:

There’s a wall on my block with ugly words telling us we don’t belong. [anti-immigrant graffiti]
City workers paint jagged gray rectangles over top of them, but the words reappear again and again, in the middle of the night.

I wish for something beautiful instead. Something all my neighbors can be proud of.
Closing my eyes, I exhale, scattering the dandelion seeds of my wish towards that wall.


What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

Like the main character I’m a second generation American, I live in Philadelphia, I love my city’s murals, I’ve despaired at my city’s vandalized and seemingly forgotten spaces, and I’ve felt encouraged by contributing to Philly’s public art through participating in Mural Arts community paint days.

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  • Lisa Amstutz
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 11:43 AM

    I’d love to read more! Feel free to submit the full manuscript at https://QueryTracker.net/query/2006/PBParty.

  • Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez
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    March 10, 2025 at 12:08 PM

    This sounds lovely, and I’m a huge fan of MAYBE SOMETHING BEAUITFUL. I’d be delighted to read the full and feel free to send up to two other stories you love as well to this link: https://QueryTracker.net/query/2049/PBParty Thank you for sharing your work with us!

  • Asia Citro
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    March 10, 2025 at 2:58 PM

    I would love to read the full manuscript! Please email submissions@theinnovationpress.com with the subject like PB PARTY REQUEST. Thank you!

  • Jes Trudel
    · Reply

    March 11, 2025 at 11:26 AM

    I’d like to take a look at this. Can you send the full manuscript to me at jes@therightsfactory.com? You can just paste it into the body of the email. Thanks!

  • Emily Keyes
    · Reply

    March 11, 2025 at 1:21 PM

    This sounds like it has potential to be very visually compelling. Can you submit your query and manuscript? https://querytracker.net/query/EmilyKeyes/PBParty

  • Elizabeth Schleisman
    · Reply

    March 12, 2025 at 11:10 AM

    I’d love to read the rest of this! If you’re interested in publishing with Beaming Books, please send my way at schleismane@beamingbooks.com. Please title it PBParty and the name of your book.

  • Helen Masvikeni
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    March 12, 2025 at 1:31 PM

    YES! I absolutely want to see this manuscript. Please send it my way—I can’t wait to dive in! Send your pitch and word document to Helenquery@megibowliterary.com. Please title it PBParty and the name of your book. Can’t wait!

  • Deidra Purvis
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    March 12, 2025 at 3:24 PM

    I would love to read more! If interested in publishing with Free Spirit, please submit a full proposal here and name PBParty in your submission title and cover letter: https://freespiritpublishing.submittable.com/submit/134906/free-spirit-submissions.

  • Jennifer Unter
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    March 12, 2025 at 4:59 PM

    I’d love to read this. Please send to Jennifer@theunteragency.com with PB Party request as subject line. Thank you!

  • Analía Cabello
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    March 14, 2025 at 12:06 AM

    Hi! I’d love to consider this manuscript – if you’d like to submit to me, please do so at https://QueryTracker.net/query/3738 and include “PB Party 2025” in the referral field. I’m looking forward to reviewing!

  • Charlotte Wenger
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    March 18, 2025 at 8:27 AM

    I love the sound of this, and I used to live in Philly! It was the first place I lived after college and will always hold a special place in my heart. I would love to take a look at this! You can send your pitch and full manuscript to me at charlotte@prospectagency.com. Thank you!

  • Janine Le
    · Reply

    March 18, 2025 at 9:31 AM

    I would be interested to read this! Please use the following link to submit:
    https://QueryTracker.net/query/JanineLe/PBParty

  • Leslie Zampetti
    · Reply

    March 20, 2025 at 3:38 PM

    As a proud Philly resident, I’d love to see this! Please query me at:
    https://QueryTracker.net/query/Lzampetti/Pitch

  • Kathleen Merz
    · Reply

    March 22, 2025 at 12:22 AM

    I’d love to take a look at this project! If you’re interested in submitting it to Eerdmans Books for Young Readers, please email the pitch and full manuscript to me at kmerz@eerdmans.com. Make sure to include “PBParty” and the name of your manuscript in the subject line.

  • Feather Flores
    · Reply

    April 17, 2025 at 2:35 AM

    Oh, this premise. Just excellent! I would love to see your manuscript on submission from an agent whenever it’s ready—no matter when that may be. 😊 Wishing you so much luck in your publishing journey (and eagerly waiting for this one)!

    x Feather
    Atheneum, Simon & Schuster

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