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PBParty Entry #28: The Magic of My Hanbok

March 24, 2024 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2024 9 Comments

GENRE: **Diverse, Holiday


WORDS: 670


Query:

I would like to share with you my picture book, THE MAGIC OF MY HANBOK, complete at 670 words.

THE MAGIC OF MY HANBOK follows eight-year-old Hae-ji who misses her grandma extra one day. She puts on the hanbok her grandma gave her and is whisked away to a seol nal, or Korean New Year, gathering with her family. She reminisces on the joy and traditions of the day and enjoys time with her grandmother before heading back home, dreaming of this year’s seol nal to come.

THE MAGIC OF MY HANBOK will interest readers who enjoyed BRINGING IN THE NEW YEAR by Grace Lin and FESTIVAL OF COLORS by Surishtha and Kabir Sehgal.

I am from Waterford, Michigan. I am the author of the BEN LEE series, published by Capstone. Along with writing, I am also a middle school ELA teacher. I graduated from Michigan State University with a degree in Elementary Education, a focus in English Language Arts, and a Teaching English as a Second Language endorsement.

Thank you for your consideration!


Excerpt:

My grandma gave me a hanbok when I turned 7, a lucky number in Korea.
It was green and pink and had beautiful flowers on the sleeves.
“Hae-ji, this is a special hanbok,” my grandma had said.
“If you miss me, remember this: When you put it on, you can see me again.”
I was missing grandma extra today, so I pulled the hanbok out of my closet.


What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

I was inspired to write this story, because like Hae-ji, Korean New Year celebrations are such a big part of my childhood and identity. I also had a strong relationship with my grandmother, and one of my most prized possessions is the hanbok she gave me. Korean characters and traditions are heavily underrepresented in the children’s literature space, so I wanted to write a story that shared them in an accessible way.

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  • Elisa Houot
    · Reply

    March 25, 2024 at 1:13 PM

    I’d love to read more! You can use this link to upload your full manuscript: QueryManager.com/ElisaHouot/PBParty
    I look forward to reading.
    Best,
    Elisa Houot, agent at The Seymour Agency

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  • Mary Cummings
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    March 25, 2024 at 4:41 PM

    There’s something really poignant here. I’d be happy to see this manuscript. Please c & p the text into an email (don’t send attachments); greatriverliterary@gmail.com Looking forward to it, Mary Cummings Great River Literary

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  • Deidra Purvis
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    March 26, 2024 at 12:51 PM

    I’d love to read your full manuscript! If interested in submitting to Free Spirit Publishing, please use Submittable: https://freespiritpublishing.submittable.com/submit/134906/free-spirit-submissions. Name PBParty in your submission title and cover letter, and I’ll prioritize the review of this submission. Thanks!

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  • Feather Flores
    · Reply

    March 26, 2024 at 4:42 PM

    This sounds fabulous! I’d love to see it on submission when you’ve signed with an agent (regardless of how long that may take—my enthusiasm will not wane 😊). Keeping all my fingers crossed for you!

    x Feather

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  • Elizabeth Schleisman
    · Reply

    March 27, 2024 at 2:05 PM

    I would love to read the rest of your book! If you’d like to submit to Beaming Books, please email me at schleismane@beamingbooks.com.

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  • Ainslie Campbell-Schwartz
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    March 27, 2024 at 4:53 PM

    I would love to see this one!

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  • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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    March 27, 2024 at 8:01 PM

    Editor request for you. Wahoooo!

    Josh Gregory says: I’d be very interested in seeing this manuscript. Mindy will let you know how to reach out to me directly anytime if you are interested in submitting your work to Albert Whitman.

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  • Adam Blackman
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    March 29, 2024 at 9:19 AM

    Hi. I’d love to see this. Please submit through the Cardinal Rule Press website using the Agented form. In the Agent Name field, enter PB Party Request. Thanks!

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  • Heather Cashman
    · Reply

    March 29, 2024 at 6:39 PM

    This sounds wonderful. If you think we’d be a good fit, please query me with this full as well as a couple other manuscripts. QueryManager.com/HeatherCashman/PBPitchParty

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