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PBParty Entry #35 : SHABBAT IN SPACE: Astronaut Jeffrey Hoffman’s Cosmic Mitzvah

March 22, 2021 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2021 10 Comments

GENRE: Diverse, NF, Biography


WORDS: 1020


Query:

Dear PBParty Editors and Agents,

I was thrilled to discover—at the 11th hour—the PB Party through one of my group members. A big thank you to Mindy for hosting the event.

SHABBAT IN SPACE: ASTRONAUT JEFFREY HOFFMAN’S COSMIC MITZVAH is a 1020-word (plus backmatter) nonfiction biography picture book for ages 7-9. As a child, Jeff’s head was often in the clouds. As an astronaut, he journeyed far beyond them. Jeff chose to carry symbols of his Jewish heritage on each space mission, and with every flight into the cosmos, his connections to the universe and his Jewish roots became more entwined. Then, on his final mission, he brought a miniature Torah into orbit. He planned a perfect time—and perfect Torah passage—for his private Sabbath celebration in space.

The astronaut and his rabbi were each interviewed extensively for this book. Manuscript includes extensive backmatter (Author’s Note, “Jews in Space” Fun Facts, Timeline, and Glossary). Comp title: Menorah Under the Sea, by Esther Heller. I have begun a second “extreme holidays” NF book, Passover on Mt. Everest.

I write fiction and nonfiction books, both rhyming and non-rhyming, for ages 1-12. My picture books include DON’T TURN THE PAGE! (Creston Books), THE BEST FOUR QUESTIONS (KarBen, and a PJ Library Selection [humor-Passover]), and biography PAINTING IN THE DARK: ESREF ARMAGAN, BLIND ARTIST (Tumblehome Learning, with an award-winning audio version for the blind). My middle grade science-adventure novel, THE WALKING FISH (Tumblehome Learning) was a National Science Teaching Association “Best Science Trade Book” award winner. My WFH chapter book, SIMONE BILES: A BIOGRAPHY CHAPTER BOOK FOR NEW READERS (Callisto Media/Rockridge Press) came out in September, and two nonfiction toddler books with the same educational publisher—TWENTY FEARLESS FEMINISTS, and STOMP, WIGGLE, CLAP AND TAP (both in rhyme) are due for release in 2021. I am member of the Rutgers One-On-One Council (RUCCL), SCBWI, and the “Book Meshuggenahs” collective marketing group for Jewish-themed picture books.

Thank you for volunteering your time for the PBParty!


Excerpt:

Jeff’s head was often in the clouds. In Hebrew school, his teacher told stories about the Jewish people wandering in the desert, across oceans, to all corners of the world. Yet Jeff’s daydreams took him farther still.

On clear nights, Jeff loved looking through his family’s telescope. The glowing moon and the shimmering stars made his heart race! He imagined rocketing through the galaxy like his favorite science fiction characters.

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  • Feather Flores
    · Reply

    March 22, 2021 at 1:47 PM

    Hi there,

    What an exciting premise! I’d love to consider your manuscript for the Chronicle Books Children’s list. If you think we could be a fit, please send the full manuscript as a PDF or Word doc to feather_flores [at] chroniclebooks [dot] com, noting “PBParty” somewhere in the subject line of your email.

    Chronicle editors are able to accept both agented and unagented manuscripts. If you’d prefer to hold off on submitting until you’ve secured representation, I’m more than happy to wait! In this case, I so hope you’ll keep me in mind when your agent takes this out on submission, and wish you all the best in your publishing journey.

    Warmly,
    Feather

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  • Adria Goetz
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    March 22, 2021 at 5:59 PM

    I love learning about special moments from history like this! I’d love to take a look at this manuscript.

  • Mary Cummings
    · Reply

    March 22, 2021 at 6:14 PM

    I’d be happy to read the manuscript. Intriguing voice and topic! – Please c & p into email rather than sending as attachment (to b.amster.kidsbooks@gmail.com)

  • Clelia Gore
    · Reply

    March 22, 2021 at 11:26 PM

    Would really love to read more! Please send via Query Manager, indicating it’s a PB Party submission. You can find the link on my website: http://www.cleliagore.com.

  • Andrea Brown Literary Agency
    · Reply

    March 24, 2021 at 11:54 PM

    I absolutely need to read this! Please see query guidelines at the agency website.

  • Rachelle Burk
    · Reply

    March 25, 2021 at 9:31 AM

    I’m so excited and grateful for this opportunity and will be responding soon! I am on an extended RV trip so it’s taking me a bit of time. Exciting news is that today I will be passing through Houston and seeing the Space Torah with my own eyes, and meeting the astronaut’s rabbi from his NASA days!

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  • Tracey Adams
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    March 25, 2021 at 2:44 PM

    Hello from a former One-on-One council member! I would love to read the full! Happy Passover! (I am 100% not ready!)

    • Rachelle Burk
      · Reply

      March 27, 2021 at 8:16 PM

      I’m so grateful and over-the-moon excited to hear from all of you! I’m traveling at the moment but will be home in 2 weeks and look forward to submitting my manuscript then.

  • Naomi Krueger
    · Reply

    March 25, 2021 at 4:42 PM

    I’m very interested in acquiring picture book biographies of inspiring people, especially those with religious and spirituality themes. This could be a really good fit. Please send to me at kruegern@beamingbooks.com

  • Karly Dizon
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    March 26, 2021 at 1:44 AM

    Always a lover of NF PBs that expand the world to the uncelebrated heroes of history. Please send me your PB text to QueryMe.online/Karly. Please include “PB Party” before your title. Thank you.

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