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PBParty Entry #4 : Welcome Home

March 10, 2025 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2025 13 Comments

GENRE: *Diverse, Contemporary


WORDS: 558


Query:

Dear Agent/Editor,

I am delighted to share my picture book, WELCOME HOME. The 558-word story follows Yussef, a young child yearning to connect with his ancestral homeland, and it is inspired by my experiences growing up in America as the child of Iraqi immigrants.

Yussef has heard stories about Iraq for as long as he can remember, and he’s heartbroken to learn that it isn’t safe for his family to return for a visit. Luckily, Nana is there to guide him on an imaginative journey to her homeland. Past and present interweave as Yussef discovers that Iraq can be found in the rhythm of a tabla or a bite of leban, and that home might not be as far away as he thought. The intergenerational bond, celebration of cultural identity, and exploration of the Iraqi immigrant experience will resonate with fans of I’LL GO AND COME BACK by Rajani LaRocca and WHERE ARE YOU FROM? by Yamile Saied Méndez.

WELCOME HOME won the 2023 SCBWI Illinois Many Voices prize, and I was proud to be selected as a picture book mentee in the 2022 We Need Diverse Books Mentorship Program. The manuscript also received an honorable mention in the 2022 PBParty annual contest (under a different name) and was named a 2022 Kate Dopirak Craft and Community Award honoree.

Thank you for your time and consideration.


Excerpt:

“Ahlan!” Nana trumpets, welcoming me with open arms.
I try to remember what to say in Arabic, but before I can blink, Nana scoops me up and plants three kisses on my cheeks. She says the third is for good luck.
Even though Nana lives nearby, going to her house is like going somewhere far away. My parents love it – they say it’s like being back home.


What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

This story is inspired by my experiences growing up in America as the child of Iraqi immigrants. Unfortunately, I have never been to Iraq. Though it is a place that looms large in the hearts of my parents and grandparents, political circumstances have prevented my family from visiting.

I hope one day I’ll be able to take my son there so we can see where our family comes from, but in the meantime, WELCOME HOME serves as my window into the place my parents called home.

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  • Katie Erickson
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 9:23 AM

    I would love to see more! Feel free to your manuscript and other work to: https://QueryTracker.net/query/KatieErickson/PBParty!

  • Joyce Sweeney
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    March 10, 2025 at 10:06 AM

    I’d like to see. Please send me the full as a word doc attachment.

  • Deidra Purvis
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 10:34 AM

    I would love to review this! If interested in publishing with Free Spirit, please submit a full proposal here: https://freespiritpublishing.submittable.com/submit/134906/free-spirit-submissions.

  • Lynnette Novak
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 10:36 AM

    LOVE! Please paste the pitch in the body of the email and attach the MS as a Word document. Send to: lynnette@theseymouragency.com. If another agent from The Seymour Agency requests, please choose ONE agent to submit to at a time.

  • Lisa Amstutz
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 10:46 AM

    I’d love to read more! Feel free to send to https://QueryTracker.net/query/2006/PBParty.

  • Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 12:13 PM

    This sounds beautiful. I’d be delighted to read the full and feel free to send up to two other stories you love as well to this link: https://QueryTracker.net/query/2049/PBParty Thank you for sharing your work with us!

  • Helen Masvikeni
    · Reply

    March 12, 2025 at 1:32 AM

    YES! I absolutely want to see this manuscript. Please send it my way—I can’t wait to dive in! Send your pitch and word document to Helenquery@megibowliterary.com. Please title it PBParty and the name of your book. Can’t wait!

  • Amy Nielsen
    · Reply

    March 12, 2025 at 7:44 AM

    I’d love to see this! https://QueryTracker.net/query/AmyNielsen/Request

  • Elizabeth Schleisman
    · Reply

    March 12, 2025 at 10:51 AM

    I’d love to read the rest of this! If you’re interested in publishing with Beaming Books, please send my way at schleismane@beamingbooks.com. Please title it PBParty and the name of your book.

  • Michaela Whatnall
    · Reply

    March 12, 2025 at 2:01 PM

    I’d love the chance to consider this project! You’re welcome to query me here, and include the full picture book text: https://querytracker.net/query/michaelawhatnall

  • Adam Blackman
    · Reply

    March 12, 2025 at 2:15 PM

    Hi. You can submit to Cardinal Rule Press using the Agents link at https://cardinalrulepress.com/pages/submission-guidelines. Enter “PBParty” in the field for agent.

  • Charlotte Wenger
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    March 18, 2025 at 8:24 AM

    I would love to take a look at this; it sounds beautiful! You can send your pitch and full manuscript to me at charlotte@prospectagency.com. Thank you!

  • Kathleen Merz
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    March 22, 2025 at 12:08 AM

    I’d love to take a look at this project! If you’re interested in submitting it to Eerdmans Books for Young Readers, please email the pitch and full manuscript to me at kmerz@eerdmans.com. Make sure to include “PBParty” and the name of your manuscript in the subject line.

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