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PBParty Entry #4 : Where They Gather

March 20, 2023 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2023 11 Comments

GENRE: **Diverse, STEM/STEAM, Rhyming


WORDS: 219


Query:

Hello,

I am submitting my 219-word manuscript, WHERE THEY GATHER for your consideration.

WHERE THEY GATHER is a lyrical story that reflects the strength, resilience, and celebration of a young Black family through the lens of a pecan sapling. As the sapling weathers the seasons of change in Alabama during the early 1900s and grows into a present-day fixture of family gatherings, the reader is left with an appreciation of what it takes to survive and flourish. Filled with the power and determination to overcome discrimination and hardship of Still I Rise and the affirmation, empowerment, and hope of All Because You Matter, WHERE THEY GATHER is inspired by my own history and the pecan tree that our family continues to gather around.

In a former life, I worked as a histotechnologist cutting body parts and keeping legs in refrigerators, as my youngest daughter once said. Now, I spend my days writing, working as an admin for #BlackCreatorsHQ, and serving as Board Secretary for BAM Festival Inc., a nonprofit in South Florida that promotes children’s literacy.

Thank you for your time and consideration.


Excerpt:

Weathered hands that tend the land
dredge deep in dampened clay.
They sow new seed with sun-kissed sweat,
then bow their heads to pray.

Here, they stand together. (husband and pregnant wife)

Roots take hold and settle in,
creeping far and free.
They stake their claim in meager ground –
a dream of what will be.

Here, they hope together.


What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

This story was inspired by my family and the pecan tree we often gathered around in my grandmother’s yard. After searching through old photos trying to find its origin, the idea of this story came to me.

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  • Emily Keyes
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    March 20, 2023 at 4:01 PM

    Would love to see the rest of this! https://querymanager.com/query/EmilyKeyes

  • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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    Author
    March 20, 2023 at 8:53 PM

    Frances Gilbert would love to see this entry. Congrats!

  • Anjanette Barr
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    March 20, 2023 at 10:54 PM

    I would love to read the rest of your manuscript. You are welcome to send your query, the full text, and any information you want to share about other manuscripts to query@dunhamlit.com. Please address it to me (Anjanette Barr) and put PBParty 2023 somewhere in the subject line. 😊

  • Lisa Amstutz
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    March 20, 2023 at 11:34 PM

    I’d love to read more! https://querymanager.com/query/2006/PBParty

  • Kate Fletcher
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    March 21, 2023 at 8:35 AM

    Would love to read more as well!

  • schleismane
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    March 21, 2023 at 4:02 PM

    I would love to read the rest of this! Please send to schleismane@beamingbooks.com.

  • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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    Author
    March 21, 2023 at 5:01 PM

    Winsome Bingham would love to read your manuscript!

  • Andrea Hall
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    March 21, 2023 at 6:50 PM

    I’d love to see the full manuscript. Please submit to me here: https://beamingbooks.submittable.com/submit/7954ccc7-bae9-4f0c-8bc8-a8f3fc45d306/2023-pb-party-submissions

  • Tara Gonzalez
    · Reply

    March 22, 2023 at 9:55 AM

    I’d love to read the rest of WHERE THEY GATHER, as well as any other completed manuscripts you’d like to share. If you’re interested in querying me, please feel free to email me at tara@emliterary.com with PBParty in the subject line.

  • Christie Megill
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    March 22, 2023 at 4:19 PM

    Hello! I’d love to read this manuscript and any other completed manuscripts you might have. If you’re interested in submitting, please email me your query & pages to cmegill@catagencyinc.com. Thanks!

  • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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    Author
    March 26, 2023 at 6:44 PM

    Agent Rick Margolis would love to read your full manuscript! I’ll share his info with you privately. Congrats. 😊

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