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PBParty Entry #43: Along For The Ride

March 24, 2024 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2024 18 Comments

GENRE: *Diverse, STEM/STEAM, SEL


WORDS: 350


Author’s website

Query:

Greetings!

ALONG FOR THE RIDE is a high-energy, 350-word picture book manuscript based on my lived experiences negotiating life with a mobility impairment, advocating for myself and enlisting help to find creative solutions to ongoing challenges.

An adventure-loving eight-year-old with a mobility impairment feels stuck when she can’t access all the places she wants to go. An idea sparks, then ignites, propelling her on a journey to find an innovative solution to address this challenge. Will her new creation be enough to transport her ALONG FOR THE RIDE?

Like We Move Together (Fritsch, McGuire and Trejos, 2021), ALONG FOR THE RIDE addresses body diversity and accessibility as well as highlighting themes of the power of community and creative problem solving. Offering insights into ongoing challenges of living with a disability, this manuscript echoes sentiments of Outside Amelia’s Window (Nastro and Budisan, 2023). ALONG FOR THE RIDE includes SEL and STEM themes, a strong family bond, a model of determination and an Author’s Note about my personal journey.

Recently named a 2024 mentee by We Need Diverse Books, I am an active member of multiple critique groups, 12×12 and SCBWI-NM where I serve as Critique Group Coordinator and facilitator of the Third Saturday Critique Group. I enjoy participating in online writing course work and contests. I have a background in education, teaching grades K-8 and serving in leadership roles for 30 years. Currently, in addition to working to hone my writing craft, I continue to tutor and consult about literacy instruction.


Excerpt:

Smiling and squealing, giggling and wiggling, I was a shoulder-riding, back-bouncing baby, along for the ride. [with parents]

Too big for that now,  I still love adventure. And, usually, it’s easy. [wheelchair for mobility impairment on paved trail, sidewalk] 

But sometimes I can’t get where I want to go. I’m stuck–

    in a rut, 

    in the mud, 

    blocked by rocks or 

    stopped by a steep, steep slope.

What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

I have a mobility impairment resulting from multiple sclerosis so I rely on a motorized scooter and a handicapped-accessible van. Like my main character, I was disappointed, frustrated and even exasperated when I found places my scooter couldn’t go. Steep hills, rocky trails or too much snow were impossible for me to maneuver. But now, when I want to spend time off-road in the high desert hills or in the mountains, I ride a DIY design/build electric bike equipped with four knobby tires. My journey has connected me with a community of individuals of all ages sharing similar challenges.

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  • Kaitlyn L Sanchez
    · Reply

    March 25, 2024 at 10:40 AM

    This sounds like a wonderful and needed story and I can’t wait to hear more about the bike you created! Thank you for being an inspiration and I can’t wait to read the full for this story and up to two other stories of yours. Mindy will be in touch with submission info!

  • writerdi2020
    · Reply

    March 25, 2024 at 2:55 PM

    Thank you so much!

  • Deidra Purvis
    · Reply

    March 26, 2024 at 1:08 PM

    I would absolutely love to see this and talk with you! If interested in submitting to Free Spirit Publishing, please use Submittable: https://freespiritpublishing.submittable.com/submit/134906/free-spirit-submissions. Name PBParty in your submission title and cover letter, and I’ll prioritize the review of this submission.

    I’m also seeking more authors for a picture book series about disabilities, and I’d love to chat. Please email me at deidra.purvis@tcmpub.com.

    Thanks!

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    • writerdi2020
      · Reply

      March 27, 2024 at 1:43 PM

      Thank you! I look forward to speaking with you.

  • Feather Flores
    · Reply

    March 26, 2024 at 4:34 PM

    This sounds fabulous! I’d love to see it on submission when you’ve signed with an agent (regardless of how long that may take—my enthusiasm will not wane 😊). Keeping all my fingers crossed for you!

    x Feather

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    • writerdi2020
      · Reply

      March 27, 2024 at 1:41 PM

      Many, many thanks! I am truly honored by your response😊

  • Elizabeth Schleisman
    · Reply

    March 27, 2024 at 2:33 PM

    I would love to read the rest of your book! If you’d like to submit to Beaming Books, please email me at schleismane@beamingbooks.com.

    • writerdi2020
      · Reply

      March 28, 2024 at 5:50 PM

      Thank you very much I’ll be in touch.

  • Ainslie Campbell-Schwartz
    · Reply

    March 28, 2024 at 4:52 PM

    I would love to see this one!

    • writerdi2020
      · Reply

      March 28, 2024 at 5:50 PM

      Many thanks for your interest!

  • Erin Casey Westin
    · Reply

    March 28, 2024 at 8:59 PM

    I’d like to see this story! If you want to share with me, please query me at this event specific link: QueryManager.com/erincaseywestin/PBParty

    • writerdi2020
      · Reply

      March 30, 2024 at 9:40 AM

      Excited to see this!

  • Adam Blackman
    · Reply

    March 29, 2024 at 9:33 AM

    Hi. I’d love to see this. Please submit through the Cardinal Rule Press website using the Agented form. In the Agent Name field, enter PB Party Request. Thanks!

    • writerdi2020
      · Reply

      April 4, 2024 at 7:55 AM

      many thanks!

  • Heather Cashman
    · Reply

    March 29, 2024 at 6:19 PM

    I love your language here and the empowerment and uplift this book would give the world! If you think we’d be a good fit, I would love to see the full and a couple other manuscripts. QueryManager.com/HeatherCashman/PBPitchParty

    • writerdi2020
      · Reply

      April 4, 2024 at 7:56 AM

      THANKS!

  • Mara Cobb
    · Reply

    April 2, 2024 at 6:45 PM

    I would love to see the full manuscript–this feels like such an important story, and it’s easy to see why you’re the right person to do so! Please submit via the link below if you would like to share (and be sure to mention PBParty!) 🙂 https://QueryManager.com/Mara_Cobb_Query_Link

  • writerdi2020
    · Reply

    April 4, 2024 at 7:57 AM

    Thanks for your kind words 😊

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