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PBParty Entry #46 : What Are You? {ART}

March 10, 2025 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2025 13 Comments

GENRE: **Diverse, Lyrical, Concept


WORDS: 383


Query:

Dear Agents, Editors, and Judges,

Thank you for participating in the PB Party and your interest in my manuscript. In WHAT ARE YOU?, a child struggles with the complexities of being asked about her multiracial identity. At 383 words, the story uses a warm, lyrical voice as the girl reflects upon her family traditions and cultural experiences. She eventually comes to embrace the beauty of being both Asian and white, while learning she is more than any one label.

WHAT ARE YOU? is inspired by my own childhood and the questions I faced growing up as the only Asian American in the classroom. I wrote this for my daughter to help her navigate questions about multiracial identity and feel the importance of our ancestors. WHAT ARE YOU? celebrates Asian American heritage in the poetic style of Joanna Ho’s Eyes that Kiss in the Corners, and explores multiracial identity as seen in Julie Leung’s The Truth About Dragons.

I currently live in California with my husband and 6 year old, who provide ample inspiration for both art and words. After a brief stint as a journalist, I spent years as an editorial photographer, and I received my MFA from the Academy of Art. I am an SCBWI member and 12×12 participant, and have other children’s book manuscripts available upon request.

Thank you for your time and consideration.


Excerpt:

“What are you?”

I pause and search deep inside for the right answer.

Once I told someone I was American, and they said, “But what about your eyes?”

Another time I said I was Asian, and they said, “Then why are you so tall?”

I look in the mirror and see my mother’s jet black hair, my almond eyes turning up at the corners to smile at the sun.


What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

WHAT ARE YOU? is inspired by my own childhood and the questions I faced growing up as the only Asian American in the classroom. While there are many diverse children’s books available today, I still struggle to find many options to read with my daughter that tackle the topic of multiracial identity. I wrote this book to empower her and other mixed children to understand that they shouldn’t feel forced to choose one side or the other as I often did, but rather to feel the joy in accepting that they are a beautiful blend of many cultures, stories, and dreams.


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  • Michelle Witte
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 3:04 AM

    I’d be happy to take a look at the full manuscript and/or dummy book. You can submit it at https://QueryTracker.net/query/michellewitte/PBParty.

  • Lindsay Auld
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    March 10, 2025 at 4:02 AM

    I’d love to see your full manuscript and/or dummy. You’re welcome to send it to me via email as an attachment or a link. Thank you, and I look forward to seeing more of your work!

  • Katie Erickson
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    March 10, 2025 at 8:37 AM

    I would love to see more! Feel free to your manuscript and dummy to: https://QueryTracker.net/query/KatieErickson/PBParty!

  • Lisa Amstutz
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    March 10, 2025 at 11:19 AM

    I’d love to see more! Feel free to submit the full manuscript and dummy at https://QueryTracker.net/query/2006/PBParty.

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  • Adria Goetz
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 12:36 PM

    I love your illustration style and would love to read this story! You’re welcome to query me here: https://QueryTracker.net/query/AdriasTreasureTrove/PBParty

  • Michelle Jackson
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 3:41 PM

    I would love to read this!! Please query me here: https://QueryTracker.net/query/2905/PBParty2025

  • Jim Averbeck (East West Literary Agency)
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 7:59 PM

    I’m interested. The organizer will be contacting you with a special URL to submit to, if you so choose.

  • Ariana Philips
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    March 11, 2025 at 11:30 AM

    I’d like to see more! Please send your portfolio link and full manuscript to aphilips@jvnla.com with PBParty in the subject line.

  • fortunatelyversatile3738a95e69
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    March 11, 2025 at 2:02 PM

    How beautiful! I’d love to see more. Please query me at https://querytracker.net/query/SallyABLA/.

  • Gabriella Crivilare
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    March 11, 2025 at 2:57 PM

    I’d be delighted to review your full dummy–your art is so warm and I love the texture! Please send your portfolio link and dummy to me at gabry@painted-words.com, and you can learn about the agency at painted-words.com. I’d love to connect and hear more about your other projects, too.

  • Tricia Lawrence
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    March 12, 2025 at 4:11 PM

    I would love to see more. Please send dummies and/or portfolios to resistwithart@gmail.com!

  • Jordan Hamessley
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    March 12, 2025 at 4:53 PM

    I’d love to take a look at the full dummy! Thank you! https://QueryTracker.net/query/HamessleyQuery/PBParty Showcase 2025

  • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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    March 17, 2025 at 2:56 PM

    Mara Cobb from Martin Literary Management would love to see your dummy. Wahoooo!

    I’ll share more details with you privately. Congrats. 😊

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