• Home
  • Mindy
    • Blog
    • PB Buzz
  • 2025 PBParty Showcase
    • 2025 PBParty Contest
    • PBParty Success Stories
    • What is PBParty?
      • Past Finalists
        • PBParty 2024 Finalists
        • 2023 PBParty Finalists
        • 2022 PBParty Finalists
        • 2021 PBParty Finalists
  • Critique Train
  • Contact

Welcome to Mindy's Writing Wonderland!

Mindy’s Writing WonderlandMindy’s Writing Wonderland
  • Home
  • Mindy
    • Blog
    • PB Buzz
  • 2025 PBParty Showcase
    • 2025 PBParty Contest
    • PBParty Success Stories
    • What is PBParty?
      • Past Finalists
        • PBParty 2024 Finalists
        • 2023 PBParty Finalists
        • 2022 PBParty Finalists
        • 2021 PBParty Finalists
  • Critique Train
  • Contact

PBParty Entry #47 : Brody Dreams of Pizza {ART}

March 10, 2025 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2025 14 Comments

GENRE: Humor, Character Driven


WORDS: 200


Query:

Dear Judges, Agents and Editors,

Thank you for your participation in Picture Book Party, and for your interest in my debut picture book, BRODY DREAMS OF PIZZA.

A dream is a wish your tastebuds make. (That’s how the saying goes, right?) Well, it is for Brody, whose only dream is to get his paws on some pizza. Trouble is, pizza can be hard to come by when you’re a dog. Brody wants pizza so bad he can taste it! And smell it, and see it, just about everywhere. It sure seems like pizza is all around, but somehow always just out of reach. Will the pizza of Brody’s dreams ever become a reality?

At roughly 200 words, BRODY DREAMS OF PIZZA follows one dog’s longing for pizza, with many amusing missteps along the way. Fans of playful, imaginative stories like Ian Falconer’s OLIVIA and Brendan Wenzel’s TWO TOGETHER will love watching Brody chase his pizza dreams. Brody is a quirky, determined character to shake your head at, root for, and love.

I am an illustrator, writer, graphic designer, and most important, optimist (like Brody). I studied illustration and advertising design at SCAD before embarking on a career in brand design. The birth of my second child (and the loss of the doggie love of my life) inspired me to revisit my first love, picture books, and begin crafting this story. BRODY DREAMS OF PIZZA has been shaped and supported by my creative communities in SCBWI and The Illustration Department, as well as my beloved critique group.

In addition to a full dummy of BRODY DREAMS OF PIZZA, I have other self-authored projects available to review. I am also open to illustrating other authors’ works.

Thank you for your time and consideration.


Excerpt:

Hi. I’m Brody.
See?
I’m a sniffy, floofy, derpy boy.
The goodest boy, I’ve been told.
But… there’s only one thing you need to know about me.
I love pizza!
It all started when…
…my tiny human dropped a slice.
I knew nothing would ever be the same.
Cheesy. Crispy. Crunchy.
What bliss!
Pizza is the goodest!
One taste is all it took.
From that day forward, I’ve been
obsessed.


What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

Brody was a real dog, a “foster fail” who came into our lives and stayed longer than anyone ever expected he would. He was truly obsessed with pizza, and seemed convinced he would get some, at every possible turn. Once in a while, he did!

After spending five wonderful years with the real-life Brody and his insatiable desire for pizza, I realized that dogs are the ultimate optimists. They always have hope in their hearts (and their tummies) – and I had to tell his story.


Tags: PBPartyPBParty 2025 finalistPBParty 2025 showcasePBParty Agent Editor Showcase 2025
14 Comments
Share
20

14 Comments

Leave your reply.
  • Michelle Witte
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 3:06 AM

    I’d be happy to take a look at the full manuscript and/or dummy book. You can submit it at https://QueryTracker.net/query/michellewitte/PBParty.

  • Sandra Sutter
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 8:08 AM

    I’d love to take a look at the full manuscript/dummy. Please submit to me (Sandra) at info@gnomeroadpublishing.com.

  • Michele McAvoy
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 8:21 AM

    I’d love to review the whole story. Please email email me at littlepresspublishing@gmail.com

  • Lynnette Novak
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 10:35 AM

    LOVE! Please paste the pitch in the body of the email and attach the MS as a Word document. Send to: lynnette@theseymouragency.com. If another agent from The Seymour Agency requests, please choose ONE agent to submit to at a time.

  • Natascha Morris
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 12:04 PM

    I’d love to see the full dummy! Please upload here: https://QueryTracker.net/query/natascha

  • Adria Goetz
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 12:37 PM

    This looks so charming, I’d love to take a look at the dummy! You’re welcome to query me here: https://QueryTracker.net/query/AdriasTreasureTrove/PBParty

  • Alysa Eisner Henkin
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 12:40 PM

    I’d love to see the dummy. I enjoy the art style and the concept.

  • Michelle Jackson
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 3:42 PM

    the illustrations really drew me in! I would love to read this!! Please query me here: https://QueryTracker.net/query/2905/PBParty2025

  • Ariana Philips
    · Reply

    March 11, 2025 at 11:20 AM

    Beautiful art! I’d like to see the full dummy. Please send your portfolio link and sample material to aphilips@jvnla.com with PBParty in the subject line.

  • Gabriella Crivilare
    · Reply

    March 11, 2025 at 2:59 PM

    I’d be delighted to review your full dummy–I especially love the detail in your city block! Please send your portfolio link and dummy to me at gabry@painted-words.com, and you can learn about the agency at painted-words.com. I’d love to connect and hear more about your other projects, too.

  • Helen Masvikeni
    · Reply

    March 12, 2025 at 1:36 PM

    YES! I absolutely want to see this manuscript and dummy. Please send it my way—I can’t wait to dive in! Send your pitch and word document to Helenquery@megibowliterary.com. Please title it PBParty and the name of your book. Can’t wait!

  • Tricia Lawrence
    · Reply

    March 12, 2025 at 4:13 PM

    I would love to see more. Please send dummies and/or portfolios to resistwithart@gmail.com!

  • Jordan Hamessley
    · Reply

    March 12, 2025 at 4:55 PM

    I’d love to see the full dummy! Please query me:

    https://QueryTracker.net/query/HamessleyQuery/PBParty Showcase 2025

  • Jennifer Unter
    · Reply

    March 14, 2025 at 3:02 PM

    I’d love to read this. Please send the full manuscript and dummy to Jennifer@theunteragency.com with PB Party request as subject line. Thank you!

Leave a ReplyCancel reply

Subscribe to Blog via Email

Contact Me

Thanks for stopping by my website. I can't wait to hear from you! :) Mindy

Send Message

© 2024 Mindy Alyse Weiss

Prev Next