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PBParty Entry #48: Arlo and the Wish {ART}

March 24, 2024 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2024 28 Comments

GENRE: *Diverse, Character Driven, Contemporary


WORDS: 566


Query:

Dear judges, agents, and editors,

Thanks for the opportunity to submit my work. I’m an author/illustrator who is also open to illustration-only opportunities. My illustration debut is coming this June in Archie and Pip: The First Day of School (Cottage Door Press, 2024).

ARLO AND THE WISH is a 566 word fictional picture book full of adventure and friendship. Arlo is a quiet, non-binary kid who loves to draw. But when they accidentally wish for everything they want at the art shop: everyone’s wishes appear! A clumsy monster named Izzie arrives as Arlo’s wish-come-true. Together they navigate rogue wishes and calamity, finding friendship along their way.

This quirky adventure is filled with the unique companionship of Real to Me (Minh Le and Raissa Figueroa), and the chaotic escapades of Llama Destroys the World (Jonathan Stutzman and Heather Fox). Full Dummy available by request.

In 2023, I made the Longlist for the British Searchlight Best Children’s Illustrated Picture Book Awards and I was a finalist in the PBParty competition. I’m an active member of SCBWI, the annual 12×12 challenge, and Storystorm. I’m also a freelance Illustrator and Toy Designer. You’ll find me sipping tea while sketching up all kinds of fun things for my regular clients: Jellycat and Nuby. I’ve won over 30 industry awards and created over 500 products with companies including Manhattan Toy, Target, Dr. Seuss, and more. When my daughter was born, I created and ran a successful blog focusing on kids design and crafts. With my MFA, I’m also an occasional adjunct art professor at the Minneapolis College of Art and Design.

Thank you for your time and consideration of my work.


Excerpt:

Arlo loved art more than anything.
Making stuff was much easier than making friends.
Just one kid and their art.
It wasn’t lonely…
Okay, sometimes it was.

Arlo staggered through the art shop, arms full of supplies.
Mom said, “Just one!”

“I wish we could have every thing we wanted, I can’t choose just one!”
The entire shop froze…

Blip, pop, fizzzzzzzzz!
Everyone’s wishes appeared, one by one.


What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

I want to encourage kids to keep using their imaginations. It feels good to ask “what if?” and see where it can lead us. Seeing how hard it can be to make friends (in my own experience and my daughter’s) encouraged me to create a story that embraces creativity, our uniqueness, and understanding. Neurodiversity and gender identity can be part of asking “what if?” and staying open to new ideas. Someone very close to me is moving through those spaces now, and they inspire me every day.


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  • Teresa Kietlinski
    · Reply

    March 25, 2024 at 9:42 AM

    Hi, I’m really drawn to your color palette and the movement in your illustrations. Would love to see more. TK

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    • Mari Richards
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      March 27, 2024 at 11:28 AM

      Thank you so much, I’ll be in touch soon!

  • Kristen Nobles
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    March 25, 2024 at 12:50 PM

    Wonderful expression in middle panel and the rendering of the concept in the bottom image is fantastic! Please send art samples.

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    • Mari Richards
      · Reply

      March 27, 2024 at 11:28 AM

      Wonderful, thank you! I’ll send samples soon!

  • Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez
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    March 25, 2024 at 2:31 PM

    Wow, this is stunning! I’d love to see this fully dummy as well as up to two other dummies. Thanks for sharing your work with the world. Mindy will be in touch soon with submission info.

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    • Mari Richards
      · Reply

      March 27, 2024 at 11:29 AM

      That’s wonderful news, thanks! I’ll send things soon!

  • Sarah Stephens
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    March 25, 2024 at 9:16 PM

    Thank you for sharing your gorgeous project! I would love to see the full dummy and hear about anything else you have in the works.

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    • Mari Richards
      · Reply

      March 27, 2024 at 11:29 AM

      Thanks so much, I’ll be in touch soon!

  • flashlightblog
    · Reply

    March 26, 2024 at 4:25 AM

    I’d like to see more. Mindy will be in touch with contact info.

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    • Mari Richards
      · Reply

      March 27, 2024 at 11:30 AM

      Thank you so much! I’ll be in touch soon!

  • Sally Kim
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    March 26, 2024 at 6:30 PM

    This look and sounds very promising! Please submit the full manuscript/dummy and your portfolio here: https://querymanager.com/query/sallyabla and note “PBParty” in the referral section so I know to prioritize it!

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    • Mari Richards
      · Reply

      March 27, 2024 at 11:30 AM

      Wonderful, thanks, I’ll be in touch soon!

  • Elizabeth Schleisman
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    March 27, 2024 at 2:44 PM

    I would love to read the rest of your book! If you’d like to submit to Beaming Books, please email me at schleismane@beamingbooks.com.

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    • Mari Richards
      · Reply

      March 27, 2024 at 10:09 PM

      Thanks so much, I’ll be in touch soon!

  • Aliza Hoover
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    March 28, 2024 at 3:27 PM

    Hi Mari! Wow, such sweet character designs, and lovely use of color! I’d love to see more of your work. Please reach out to me at aliza@catagencyinc.com

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    • Mari Richards
      · Reply

      March 28, 2024 at 9:53 PM

      Wonderful, thank you so much! I’ll be in touch soon!

  • Ainslie Campbell-Schwartz
    · Reply

    March 28, 2024 at 4:58 PM

    Love this! Would love to see the whole story.

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    • Mari Richards
      · Reply

      March 28, 2024 at 9:54 PM

      Thank you, I’ll be in touch soon!

  • Kelly Sonnack
    · Reply

    March 28, 2024 at 8:34 PM

    This is so lovely – I see that Sally already requested, so I’ll be in touch with her so we can consider for ABLA.

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    • Mari Richards
      · Reply

      March 28, 2024 at 9:54 PM

      That’s wonderful news Kelly, thank you!

  • Heather Cashman
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    March 29, 2024 at 5:55 PM

    I would love to read the full of this as well as a couple other manuscript dummies! Please query me if you think we would be a good fit!
    QueryManager.com/HeatherCashman/PBPitchParty

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    • Mari Richards
      · Reply

      March 29, 2024 at 8:07 PM

      Thank you, I’ll reach out soon!

  • Liz Nealon
    · Reply

    March 30, 2024 at 7:09 AM

    I like your art very much and would love to see your full dummy. Please submit at QueryManager.com/Nealon/PBParty_2024 and put “PB Party” as the referral. Looking forward to seeing/reading your story!

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    • Mari Richards
      · Reply

      March 31, 2024 at 3:50 PM

      Thank you so much!

  • Hilary Harwell
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    April 2, 2024 at 9:32 AM

    Love your art! I’d love to see the full manuscript & dummy – please send a query and word doc attachment to hilaryquery at ktliterary.com. Thanks!

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    • Mari Richards
      · Reply

      April 2, 2024 at 10:07 AM

      That’s wonderful to hear, thank you! I’ll be in touch soon!

  • Kei Nakatsuka
    · Reply

    April 5, 2024 at 3:57 PM

    Hello! I am really intrigued by this story and would love to take a look at the full dummy if you interested in sharing with Bloomsbury. If so, please email it to me at kei.nakatsuka@bloomsbury.com. If you have a portfolio or website I would also be glad to have that on hand, too!

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    • Mari Richards
      · Reply

      April 5, 2024 at 9:36 PM

      Thank you so much!

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