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PBParty Entry #48 : Moss {ART}

March 10, 2025 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2025 11 Comments

GENRE: STEM/STEAM, Lyrical, Non-Fiction


WORDS: 576


Query:

Dear PBParty Judges, Agents, and Editors,

Thank you for taking the time to consider my 576-word lyrical nonfiction picture book, MOSS. Soft, silent, squishy, moss clumps and mats and clings, cushions, creeps, and clusters. But what is moss? MOSS takes readers back in time to show how ancient mosses have survived for eons, on a journey across all seven continents to uncover what moss is, and into the future to discuss how moss could be important to our very survival.

Like Caves by Nell Cross Beckerman and Mushroom Rain by Laura K. Zimmermann, MOSS uses lyrical language and rich, atmospheric illustrations to explore its subject with a mysterious, awe-filled tone. Vetted by Janice Glime, Professor Emerita of Biological Sciences at Michigan Technological University and past President of the International Association of Bryologists, MOSS is aimed at K-third grade students and addresses Next Generation Science Standards in each grade level. Back matter includes additional moss facts, science activities, an author’s note and more.

I am honored to be a 2023 PBParty Finalist and PB Rising Stars Runner-up, and my poetry and art was recently published in the FABULOUS FACTS issue of Little Thoughts Press. I am a member of Storyteller Academy, 12 x 12, and SCBWI. Besides homeschooling my children for nine years in Bellevue, Washington, I have enjoyed work as an art museum educator and as a watercolor artist and nature journaling instructor, learning from naturalist John Muir Laws in the San Francisco Bay area. Helping children notice and appreciate the world around them, especially the oft-ignored and overlooked, brings me joy and is my inspiration for writing this book.

I have several other picture book manuscripts ready–both humorous fiction and STEM-related lyrical nonfiction–that I’m happy to send you upon request. Thank you for participating in #pbparty and for your interest in my project.


Excerpt:

The forest air hangs
heavy and damp.

Underfoot,
leaves crinkle.
Sticks crackle.

Sunlight peeks,
sneaks,
streaks,
then suddenly…

one bright beam
reveals a bursting, gleaming
patch of green…

MOSS.

Soft, silent, squishy,
moss clumps and mats and clings,
cushions,
creeps,
and clusters.

But what is moss?

Moss is….

ANCIENT.

Long ago, land was
barren and brown,
without trees, grass, or flowers,
no bugs, birds, or beasts.
Until …


What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

I live in western Washington, where moss grows abundantly–a beautiful perk of living here. A week after leading a children’s nature journaling class about moss, a mother approached me and said, “My son now excitedly points out moss wherever we go. He’d never noticed it before!” Helping kids notice and appreciate the world around them, especially the overlooked and under-appreciated, brings me joy. A nonfiction picture book writing assignment inspired me to learn even more about moss. After countless hours of research, I’d developed a deep appreciation for this ancient, misunderstood, vitally important plant. I had to tell its story.


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  • Sandra Sutter
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 8:34 AM

    I’d love to take a look at the full manuscript/dummy. Please submit to me (Sandra Sutter) at info@gnomeroadpublishing.com.

  • Sandra Sutter
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    March 10, 2025 at 9:06 AM

    I’d like to take a look at the full manuscript/dummy. Please submit to me (Sandra Sutter) at info@gnomeroadpublishing.com.

  • Sandra Sutter
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    March 10, 2025 at 9:07 AM

    This looks interesting! Please send the full manuscript/dummy to me (Sandra Sutter) at info@gnomeroadpublishing.com.

  • Joyce Sweeney
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 10:55 AM

    I’d like to see. Please send dummy as PDF.

    • Janine Le
      · Reply

      March 18, 2025 at 9:44 AM

      I would be interested to read this! Please use the following link to submit:
      https://QueryTracker.net/query/JanineLe/PBParty

  • Lisa Amstutz
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 11:18 AM

    I’d love to see more! Feel free to submit the full manuscript and dummy at https://QueryTracker.net/query/2006/PBParty.

  • Ariana Philips
    · Reply

    March 11, 2025 at 11:33 AM

    I’d like to see the full manuscript! Please send your portfolio link and manuscript to aphilips@jvnla.com with PBParty in the subject line.

  • Gabriella Crivilare
    · Reply

    March 11, 2025 at 3:03 PM

    I’d be delighted to review your full manuscript/dummy–I love how you illuminate the amazing world of moss! Please send your portfolio link and materials to me at gabry@painted-words.com, and you can learn about the agency at painted-words.com. I’d love to connect and hear more about your other projects, too.

  • AGENT Heather Cashman
    · Reply

    March 12, 2025 at 4:40 PM

    I’d love to see the full dummy of this and a couple more if you have them.
    heather@stormliteraryagency.com

    • Janine Le
      · Reply

      March 18, 2025 at 9:45 AM

      I would like to read this one! Please use the following link to submit:
      https://QueryTracker.net/query/JanineLe/PBParty

  • Kathleen Merz
    · Reply

    March 22, 2025 at 12:33 AM

    I’d love to take a look at this project! If you’re interested in submitting it to Eerdmans Books for Young Readers, please email the pitch and full manuscript to me at kmerz@eerdmans.com. Make sure to include “PBParty” and the name of your manuscript in the subject line.

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