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PBParty Entry #50 : Herb’s Garden {ART}

March 10, 2025 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2025 5 Comments

GENRE: *Humor, Character Driven, SEL


WORDS: 432


Query:

Dear Agents and Editors,

As an author / illustrator I’m excited to share HERB’S GARDEN, a humorous, character driven picture book at 432 words, perfect for fans of No, No, Gnome! by Ashlyn Anstee, and This Rock Is Mine! by Kaye Umansky.

Tending a garden is a giant job that goes around the clock. That job belongs to Herb. He doesn’t need any help because this gnome works alone! But after a series of missteps Herb’s Garden is destroyed. Mending the garden, while protecting it is a massive project. Whether Herb likes it or not, help has arrived. Refusing the help, Herb lands himself in an impossible situation. Herb must decide if maybe a little help can be, well helpful. If Herb could share his responsibilities instead of trying to do it all himself, he might even discover what else, a garden is for.

I am the author of a new chapter book series, GOLDA AND EZRA, published this year by Capstone. Recently I was a finalist for the Cornerstone Writer-in-Residence Program at Wilton Library, a RUCCL mentee in 24/23, and my illustration portfolio won the Tassy Walden Award for New Voices in 2023. I have two masters, one in Creative Writing and the other in Educational Theater. I am a former k-12 theater educator, a published youth playwright and an active member of 12X12, SCBWI, and Kids Comics Unite. Currently located in Connecticut, when I’m not creating stories for young people, I am wrangling my two little gnomes, and two fur babies.

Thank you for your time and consideration.


Excerpt:

The Garden has many enemies. Defending it, is an around the clock job.
That job belongs to Herb.
HERB: The one and only.
If Herb does his job right, the garden is a peaceful place.
HERB: If? Have you looked around?
If Herb had help, he’d have time to stop and smell the roses.
HERB: Help? This Gnome works alone!
No gnome can tend the garden alone.
HERB: Watch me!


What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

This story was inspired by watching my kid take on a large task on their own – rather than wait a moment for help – they tried to do the task quickly all by themself. Which lead to a big clean up after. That combined with working in my garden and discovering that I tend to do the same thing as my kids – take on a very large task that I should ask for help with – that made me think of this character I had been doodling – Herb – his curmudgeon tendency to just get the job done jumped onto the page.


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  • Michelle Witte
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    March 10, 2025 at 3:10 AM

    I’d be happy to take a look at the full manuscript and/or dummy book. You can submit it at https://QueryTracker.net/query/michellewitte/PBParty.

  • Natascha Morris
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    March 10, 2025 at 12:06 PM

    I love garden gnomes! Please upload your dummy here: https://QueryTracker.net/query/natascha

  • Emily Keyes
    · Reply

    March 11, 2025 at 1:25 PM

    I’d love to see the manuscript or dummy as well. https://querytracker.net/query/EmilyKeyes/PBParty

  • Helen Masvikeni
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    March 12, 2025 at 1:37 PM

    YES! I absolutely want to see this manuscript and dummy. Please send it my way—I can’t wait to dive in! Send your pitch and word document to Helenquery@megibowliterary.com. Please title it PBParty and the name of your book. Can’t wait!

  • Charlotte Wenger
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    March 18, 2025 at 8:39 AM

    I would love to take a look at this; it looks and sounds absolutely delightful! You can send your pitch and dummy to me at charlotte@prospectagency.com with “PBParty” in the subject line. Thank you!

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