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PBParty Entry #53 : Honey Tea for Alice {ART}

March 10, 2025 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2025 13 Comments

GENRE: Diverse, Character Driven, SEL


WORDS: 530


Query:

Dear Agents and Editors,

As an author-illustrator I’m excited for the opportunity to share my 330-word picture book, HONEY TEA for ALICE, with you. Having a quirky intergenerational friendship as seen in OLD FRIENDS, and the emotion and agency shown in THE REMEMBER BALLOONS, this book is intended for ages 3-8.

Spunky Ruby and her best-old-friend Alice share a love of honeybees and tea brewed by a pet dragon, but their play dates are threatened when Alice suffers from a problem that can’t be fixed with a band-aide. Can Ruby better understand Alice’s memory problem and be a best-little-friend to Alice?

My joyful experience as a recreation director with the elderly, and my traumatic childhood experience of losing my favorite aunt to a degenerative brain disorder helped to inform this story.

My hope is that this story will help the reader discuss their emotions, ask questions, and connect to loved ones who have dementia in meaningful ways.

I hold a BFA from Massachusetts College of Art and have spent many years honing my writing and illustrating crafts. I belong to The Writer’s Loft, SCBWI, NESCBWI, and several critique groups including The Greater Boston Illustrator Group (GBIG). I am a RCCUL mentee and am published in the Writer’s Loft Anthology.

A dummy is available for HONEY TEA for ALICE as well as additional manuscripts upon request. My portfolio may be viewed at ShirleyFadden.com.

Thank you for your time and consideration.


Excerpt:

The first time I saw my neighbor, I said, “Nice to meet you, Alice. You sure look like you have had a lot of birthday parties. Can I come to one?”

My mom turned as red as a raspberry. “Meet Ruby.” She sighed.

But Alice just laughed. And ever since then . . .

Alice is my new old friend.


What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

As a recreation director, I had the joyful experience of working with memory-care residents, providing them with meaningful activities and comfort, but it was the confusion and sadness surrounding my traumatic childhood experience of losing my favorite aunt to a degenerative brain disease (similar to dementia) that drove me to write this. I currently support 3 family members living with dementia.


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  • Michelle Witte
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 3:14 AM

    I’d be happy to take a look at the full manuscript and/or dummy book. You can submit it at https://QueryTracker.net/query/michellewitte/PBParty.

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  • Sandra Sutter
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    March 10, 2025 at 8:14 AM

    I’d love to take a look at the full manuscript/dummy. Please submit to me (Sandra Sutter) at info@gnomeroadpublishing.com.

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  • Michele McAvoy
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    March 10, 2025 at 8:28 AM

    I would love to review the full manuscript please email me at littlepresspublishing@gmail.com

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  • Katie Erickson
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    March 10, 2025 at 8:40 AM

    I would love to see more! Feel free to your manuscript and dummy to: https://QueryTracker.net/query/KatieErickson/PBParty!

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    • Janine Le
      · Reply

      March 18, 2025 at 9:41 AM

      I’d be happy to read this! Please use the following link to submit:
      https://QueryTracker.net/query/JanineLe/PBParty

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  • Katie Erickson
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 8:42 AM

    I would love to see more of your work! Feel free to your manuscript and dummy to: https://QueryTracker.net/query/KatieErickson/PBParty!

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  • Lisa Amstutz
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    March 10, 2025 at 11:08 AM

    I’d love to see more! Feel free to submit the full manuscript and dummy at https://QueryTracker.net/query/2006/PBParty.

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  • Alyssa Eisner Henkin
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    March 10, 2025 at 12:36 PM

    I’d love to see the dummy. Thank you!

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  • Jim Averbeck (East West Literary Agency)
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 8:03 PM

    I’d like to see a ms and dummy! The organizer will be contacting you with a special URL to submit to, if you so choose.

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  • fortunatelyversatile3738a95e69
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    March 11, 2025 at 2:07 PM

    So fun! I’d love to see more. Please query me at https://querytracker.net/query/SallyABLA/.

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  • Gabriella Crivilare
    · Reply

    March 11, 2025 at 3:07 PM

    I’d be delighted to review your full dummy–I love your color palette and the glimpse we see of your main character’s enthusiasm! Please send your portfolio link and dummy to me at gabry@painted-words.com, and you can learn about the agency at painted-words.com. I’d love to connect and hear more about your other projects, too.

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  • Helen Masvikeni
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    March 12, 2025 at 1:39 PM

    YES! I absolutely want to see this manuscript and dummy. Please send it my way—I can’t wait to dive in! Send your pitch and word document to Helenquery@megibowliterary.com. Please title it PBParty and the name of your book. Can’t wait!

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  • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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    March 17, 2025 at 2:58 PM

    Mara Cobb from Martin Literary Management would love to see your dummy. Wahoooo!

    I’ll share more details with you privately. Congrats. 😊

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