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PBParty Entry #6 : Big, Bad Dinosaur #1

March 22, 2021 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2021 4 Comments

GENRE: Character Driven, STEM, Humor


WORDS: 365


Query:

Dear Agents and Editors:

Are you looking for STEM and humor? Then you’ll dig BIG, BAD DINOSAUR #1. In 364 words, Spinosaurus spews facts about himself (and — whoops — T-Rex) as he auditions for the movie “Cretaceous Park.”

Spino the Dino is tired of T-Rex getting all the best parts in Hollywood. Who was actually bigger and badder? The longer, taller, heavier Spinosaurus with unbreakable teeth, no doubt! But Spino gets a surprise when there’s one more audition. Maybe he shouldn’t have been so braggy…

BIG, BAD DINOSAUR #1 combines facts like “Do You Really Want to Meet a Spinosaurus?” with fun in the vein of “How to Care for Your T-Rex.” Kids ages 4-8 love dinosaurs, and the backmatter provides a chart so children can debate (friendly, of course) which dinosaur — Tyrannosaurus Rex, Spinosaurus, or Giganotosaurus — was the biggest and baddest.

I am a library media specialist and a contributor to “Owensboro Parent” and “Owensboro Living” magazines. Also, I actively participate in SCBWI and am a Gold Member of Julie Hedlund’s 12×12 Picture Book Challenge. My article on endangered sea turtles was published in the August 2019 edition of Guardian Angel Kids online magazine, and my 2020 and 2021 entries won honorable mentions in Susanna Leonard Hill’s Valentiny contests.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I have six additional picture book manuscripts and a middle-grade manuscript available for review upon request. I look forward to your response.


Excerpt:

Now that PBParty 2021 is over, the author requested that I remove the sample.

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  • Christa Heschke, McIntosh and Otis
    · Reply

    March 25, 2021 at 5:22 PM

    My assistant and I would love to take a look at this! Please send your query and manuscript to chquery@mcintoshandotis.com, with PBParty in the subject line. Looking forward to reading on! 🙂

  • Elizabeth Muster
    · Reply

    March 25, 2021 at 6:40 PM

    Thank you!

  • Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez
    · Reply

    March 26, 2021 at 3:03 PM

    I’m not generally a dino person, but your voice in this and the fact that it’s not t-rex has me totally intrigued. I’d be delighted to see this! QueryManager.com/2049/PBParty

  • Elizabeth Muster
    · Reply

    March 26, 2021 at 3:48 PM

    Awesome! Thanks!

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