• Home
  • Mindy
    • Blog
    • PB Buzz
  • 2025 PBParty Showcase
    • 2025 PBParty Contest
    • PBParty Success Stories
    • What is PBParty?
      • Past Finalists
        • PBParty 2024 Finalists
        • 2023 PBParty Finalists
        • 2022 PBParty Finalists
        • 2021 PBParty Finalists
  • Critique Train
  • Contact

Welcome to Mindy's Writing Wonderland!

Mindy’s Writing WonderlandMindy’s Writing Wonderland
  • Home
  • Mindy
    • Blog
    • PB Buzz
  • 2025 PBParty Showcase
    • 2025 PBParty Contest
    • PBParty Success Stories
    • What is PBParty?
      • Past Finalists
        • PBParty 2024 Finalists
        • 2023 PBParty Finalists
        • 2022 PBParty Finalists
        • 2021 PBParty Finalists
  • Critique Train
  • Contact

PBParty Entry #7 : Girlhood Is…

March 10, 2025 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2025 4 Comments

GENRE: SEL, Lyrical, Concept


WORDS: 245


Query:

Dear PBParty People:

Thanks for the opportunity to submit GIRLHOOD IS… a 245-word lyrical, concept picture book about girl power!

Girls are more than sugar, spice and everything nice. From friendship beads to sweat beads on your face after winning the race…Girlhood is…whatever you want it to be! GIRLHOOD IS… demonstrates the popular social media phrase: “Girlhood is a spectrum” through the use of parallel language but with contrasting activities.

GIRLHOOD IS… is the girl empowerment of Amy Krouse Rosenthal, Paris Rosenthal, and Holly Hatam’s DEAR GIRL meets the positive, lyrical tone of Derrick Barnes and Gordon C. James’s I AM EVERY GOOD THING.

GIRLHOOD IS… is for fans of the Barbie movie and feminism. It has hooks of Social Emotional Learning (SEL), especially themes of “Be you,” self-esteem, and inclusivity. GIRLHOOD IS…could be marketed as a gift book or board book for baby showers and has series potential.

I was the winner of the SCBWI Work-in-Progress Award for Picture Books and a #PBRisingStars mentee. I was a #PBParty Honorable Mention last year. I am a multiple year winner in Vivian Kirkfield’s #50PreciousWords Contest and winner of #FallWritingFrenzy for my poetry. I am an active multiple year member of SCBWI and multiple critique groups. As a former teacher of over a decade and a mom of two girls, I wrote GIRLHOOD IS… for all girls to embrace who they are and all the limitless possibilities.

Per your submission guidelines, the 60 word sample is pasted as directed. Additional submission ready manuscripts in a variety of genres are available upon request.

Thank you for your consideration.


Excerpt:

Girlhood is… daisy chains and chain link fence home runs.

Petals and metal…
Flowers and power!
Delicate. Strong.

Girlhood is… wise gals [texting advice “You’ve got this!”] and wisecracking jokes.

Girl, talk.
Use your voice.
Laugh. Giggle. Snort!

Girlhood is… shopping till dropping and dropping knowledge like a microphone.

BOOM! Make room!
Slay, Girl… [fashion]
slay. [conquer difficult math problem]


What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

When I was a young girl, I had a very short haircut. I was often misgendered by others calling me a “boy.” It hurt me that others would define my gender based solely on a hairstyle. Flash forward now as a soccer mom of two girls, unfortunately these stereotypes still exist. A girl on my daughter’s team has a buzzcut and other teams often misgender and bully her based on her haircut. I wrote GIRLHOOD IS… for all girls to feel empowered and not placed within narrow definitions.

Tags: PBPartyPBParty 2025 finalistPBParty 2025 showcasePBParty Agent Editor Showcase 2025
4 Comments
Share
23

4 Comments

Leave your reply.
  • Joyce Sweeney
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 10:10 AM

    I’d like to see this. Please send the full to me as a word doc attachment.

    • Author #7
      · Reply

      March 12, 2025 at 9:02 AM

      Thank you so much for your interest! 🙂

  • Lynnette Novak
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 10:36 AM

    LOVE! Please paste the pitch in the body of the email and attach the MS as a Word document. Send to: lynnette@theseymouragency.com. If another agent from The Seymour Agency requests, please choose ONE agent to submit to at a time.

    • Author#7
      · Reply

      March 12, 2025 at 9:04 AM

      Thank you so much for your request! 🙂

Leave a ReplyCancel reply

Subscribe to Blog via Email

Contact Me

Thanks for stopping by my website. I can't wait to hear from you! :) Mindy

Send Message

© 2024 Mindy Alyse Weiss

Prev Next