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PBParty Entry #8 : A Delicious Dozen: A Celebration of Cookies From Around the World

March 10, 2025 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PBParty Finalists 2025 7 Comments

GENRE: **Diverse, Holiday, Expository Non-Fiction


WORDS: 700


Query:

Dear Agent or Editor,

I am submitting for your consideration my 700-word, 32-page picture book A DELICIOUS DOZEN: A CELEBRATION OF COOKIES FROM AROUND THE WORLD. Travel to twelve countries on five continents and celebrate a dozen different cultures and cookies—one for each month of the year—from Scottish New Year’s Day shortbread, to good luck Chinese almond cookies, to celebratory Mexican polvorones cookies.

My story would appeal to readers of ICE CREAM EVERYWHERE: Sweet Stories from Around the World by Judy Campbell-Smith (Sleeping Bear Press, 2024), TEATIME AROUND THE WORLD: A Tea Book for Kids by Denyse Waissbluth (Greystone Kids, 2020), and PANCAKES TO PARATHAS: Breakfast Around the World by Alice B. McGinty (Little Bee Books, 2019).

I am a 4th grade teacher at a diverse public school in Los Angeles, California. I love to bake, experimenting with recipes from around the world—my family and friends appreciate it! My goal is to share informative nonfiction stories with young readers to help open their minds to new cultures and people who have impacted our world.

As an active member of SCBWI and the Courage to Create, I work on improving my craft by attending conferences, taking classes, and participating in two critique groups. In 2023, I was a mentee in the PB Rising Stars Program as well as a PB Party Honorable Mention. In 2024, I was an SCBWI Work-In-Progress Winner in the “Underrepresented Voices” category. In 2025, I won a gold scholarship to 12×12.

Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.


Excerpt:

Make them and bake them. Eat them and share them.

With so many textures, flavors, sizes, and shapes, cookies are a reason to celebrate. Let’s eat cookies around the world!

Scotland – Cookies celebrate new beginnings. Isla and Lachlan’s relatives bring crumbly
shortbread cookies as a gift for a sweet New Year. The shortbread comes in three shapes and is made with only four ingredients: butter, flour, sugar, and salt.


What inspired you to write this story & what do you have in common with it:

As an educator and daughter of Filipino immigrants, I believe diversity and multiculturalism is so important. I think that one interesting way to learn about different cultures is through food. I have always loved to bake and eat desserts! I was inspired to write this story after a trip to Europe, where I sampled treats from various countries. In my story, I made sure to include cookies from around the world, including the Philippines. Through food, I can teach children about new places, celebrations, and traditions.

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  • Lynne Marie
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 9:00 AM

    I would like to see more of this submission. Please send to lynne.littlepresspublishing@gmail.com with PBParty Request: [Title by Author] in the subject line. (Note to Others: Any submissions not requested will be deleted unread.)

  • Katie Erickson
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 10:10 AM

    I would love to see more! Feel free to your manuscript and others to: https://QueryTracker.net/query/KatieErickson/PBParty!

  • Katie Erickson
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 10:10 AM

    I would love to see more! Feel free to your manuscript (with one other) to: https://QueryTracker.net/query/KatieErickson/PBParty!

  • Katie Erickson
    · Reply

    March 10, 2025 at 10:11 AM

    I would love to see more! Feel free to your manuscript to: https://QueryTracker.net/query/KatieErickson/PBParty!

  • Ariana Philips
    · Reply

    March 11, 2025 at 11:31 AM

    I’d like to see the full manuscript! Please send it to aphilips@jvnla.com with PBParty in the subject line.

  • Amy Nielsen
    · Reply

    March 12, 2025 at 7:52 AM

    I would love to see this! Please send to https://QueryTracker.net/query/AmyNielsen/Request

  • Kathleen Merz
    · Reply

    March 22, 2025 at 12:10 AM

    I’d love to take a look at this project! If you’re interested in submitting it to Eerdmans Books for Young Readers, please email the pitch and full manuscript to me at kmerz@eerdmans.com. Make sure to include “PBParty” and the name of your manuscript in the subject line.

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