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PBParty New Draft Challenge & Critique Train FAQ

September 18, 2020 Posted by Mindy Alyse Weiss PB, PBParty, Writers 64 Comments

Open for passengers May 15 – 17 EST

Conductor: Mindy Alyse Weiss

Keep up to date with all the PBParty events (including the contest) on Facebook!

The PBParty Critique Train will usually run the 3rd Thursday of each month all day EST. Double check above for the occasional date change.


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How do I participate in the New Draft Challenge & Critique Train?

*Write a new PB draft on challenge day EST (you can plan ahead…but don’t write until the Critique Train opens). 

*Shout out on the #PBParty Critique Train social media post: DONE! (If you aren’t on social media, you can still hop on the Critique Train Google doc.)

*Add your name at the end of the Critique Train Google Doc

*CELEBRATE!!!! 🎉


FAQ

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HELP! I can’t add my name to the Google Doc.

You can ONLY add your name to the Critique Train Google Doc on the day of the New Draft Challenge & Critique Train. Make sure you write a new PB draft during the challenge first. The Google Doc will be open 24 hours EST.

If the contest is live and you can’t add your name, look for a small pencil (probably toward the top). That should allow you to edit. If you’re on your phone, you might need to upload the free Google doc app.

If you still have trouble, message me and I’ll add you.

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Who critiques my manuscript?

The person above you on the Critique Train list will do your critique. If you’re the first person to complete a draft and add your name to the list, I’ll do your critique. 

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Which manuscript do I critique?

You’ll critique the person who finishes a picture book draft and adds their name to the Google Doc under yours.

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Do I have to send my new draft for a critique?

No–you don’t need to send that draft. You’re welcome to send any PB manuscript that could use fresh eyes. You can also let your critiquer know that you’d like a little time to revise before sending–and work out a schedule that’s great for both of you. 

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How do I connect to give/receive a critique?

Twitter handles should be listed on the Google Doc. Following each other will make it easier to message and exchange e-mails and details. 

If you have trouble connecting after a day or two, please message me and I’ll do my best to help.

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Can I participate if I’m not on Twitter?

I hope you’ll consider joining Twitter because the PB community is AMAZING with tons of opportunities to meet supportive creatives, discuss craft, learn, share road bumps and successes, and enter giveaways. 

But…you may enter if you’re not on Twitter. I’ll post on Facebook as well and you can shout out DONE on that post and enter your name and Facebook link or e-mail on the Google Doc. 

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How fast do I need to send the critique back?

It’s great if you can send the critique back within a few days…but we all know that life can get busy. Let the writer know your schedule and when to expect the critique. It’s better to work out a longer schedule and give a thoughtful critique than rush your feedback. 

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Do I have to come up with the idea and write the draft all in the same day?

Nope. You’re welcome to flesh out a Storystorm or other idea, use a Plot Clock or other plotting method, do character sketches, research, find great names…pretty much anything other than digging into the actual draft.   

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HELP! I want to give a great critique but could use some guidelines.

Here’s a PB Critique Checklist I posted on my blog. You can print it out on the side of the page or at the bottom. This is also helpful for editing your own picture books. Happy critiquing and revising!

We all have different strengths–I KNOW you’ll be able to give helpful feedback.

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If I write a new PB draft during this challenge, can it also count for another challenge?

Definitely! I always count my new drafts for PBParty and 12x12PB. And if a PBParty New Draft Challenge falls during NaPiBoWriWee or any other challenge or kidlit writing contest, it could count for them, too. I love the extra push challenges give me and hope PBParty and other awesome challenges help you, too. 

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Where do I write DONE after my draft is finished?

I’ll tweet a fun Critique Train graphic at midnight…right when the challenge starts. You’ll reply DONE there. And then–we’ll celebrate!

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I’m not on EST–how can I make sure I don’t miss the Critique Train?

I’ll post a 24 hour reminder at midnight…so you know the exact time it will start the next day. Plus, you’ll see the current EST at the top of this page and a countdown to the moment the challenge starts on my Home page.

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Random tips

Critiquers might want to share their strengths and possibly weaknesses (such as meter) to help the writer decide the best manuscript to send.

This is a great way to make new writing friends–and possibly fresh eyes for future manuscript swaps (if you both believe it’s a good match and have the time). 

Follow other participants on Twitter, cheer each other on, and have fun with this challenge. (Hint: More PB writers will probably follow you back if you have things like PB, SCBWI, etc. in your Twitter profile.)

Here’s a great site to find names–I like scrolling down to see the 500 or 1000 top names from the most current available year. 

*Please let me know any great news for your #PBParty New Draft Challenge manuscripts. I can’t wait to celebrate with you!

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  • Becca Dupuis
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    January 20, 2021 at 10:08 AM

    Tomorrow will be my first time joining 🙂 I’m excited

    • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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      January 21, 2021 at 5:53 AM

      Yay! I’m so glad you’re hopping on the PBParty Critique Train, Becca. 🙂

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  • kkelly0501
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    January 22, 2021 at 9:01 AM

    When does the person I critique need to send me their draft? Is there a deadline? Thank you

    • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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      January 23, 2021 at 11:48 PM

      You and the person you critique (or receive a critique from) can talk about a sub date that works for both of you…and about how long you think it’ll take to get feedback to them.

      It’s great to be in touch as soon as possible, so it isn’t forgotten though.

      Congrats again on your new PB!

  • lisakhan9
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    January 23, 2021 at 3:27 PM

    Hello Mindy, good day to you. Is it too late to join the train?

    • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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      January 23, 2021 at 11:51 PM

      Hi Lisa. I’m sorry, you missed this train…but I hold them every month. The next two will be February 18 and March 25.

      If you’re looking for a critique group or for someone to swap manuscripts with, you can shout it out on Twitter using the #PBParty hashtag, and I’d be happy to boost it.

      Happy writing!

  • Michelle S. Kennedy
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    February 5, 2021 at 11:43 PM

    Your trains are so awesome! I have gotten to know some really wonderful writers through your trains and have kept in touch with several critique partners from them. Mindy, THANK YOU for these amazing opportunities to connect with other PB writers! <3

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    • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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      February 9, 2021 at 5:25 AM

      Thanks so much, Michelle. I love when writers meet new CPs through the Critique Train. 🙂

  • Pamela
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    February 6, 2021 at 2:48 PM

    What time does the event begin

    • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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      February 9, 2021 at 5:28 AM

      The event lasts all day EST. I put a tweet up at midnight, just as it starts.

      The next date is February 18. If you’re not on EST and need help with the time difference, there’s a World Clock at the top of this page and a countdown on my home page.

      I hope you’ll be able to join us for the next challenge!

  • claireannette1
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    February 18, 2021 at 3:42 PM

    Hi Mindy, This is my first time participating and I’m writing away. Am I supposed to let you know or just say done when I’m done?

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    • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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      February 18, 2021 at 4:54 PM

      Yay for the new PB you’re writing, Claire!

      When you finish writing it, say DONE on the Twitter thread (I posted the start of the train at midnight EST), then hop onto the Critique Train Google doc and add your name:

      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HNYzCI32DBsN6avkEY0M_FPitI3v2y0Man9g-I1tWdc/edit?usp=sharing

      *I love your avatar. 🙂

  • Mimi
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    February 19, 2021 at 1:55 PM

    I’m late, can I still participate?

    • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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      February 19, 2021 at 8:43 PM

      Congrats on your new PB, Mimi. The Critique Train doors are closed…but I tweeted about someone who missed the train because of power outages in Texas. Maybe the two of you can swap critiques?

  • Melanie Adkins
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    March 17, 2021 at 6:50 PM

    What time on the 25th?

    • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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      March 22, 2021 at 10:43 PM

      The Critique Train runs all day EST on March 25. Joyce’s Ask the Agent Zoom is from 1 pm – 2 pm EST.

  • Gauri
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    March 23, 2021 at 5:59 PM

    Looking forward to the recording on March 25. Thank you Mindy.

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  • Reed Hilton-Eddy
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    May 5, 2021 at 10:48 PM

    Is it any story or you give a prompt on the 20th? I also do not have Twitter

    • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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      May 6, 2021 at 5:20 AM

      Hi Reed. You can write any PB you’d like. I love digging into my Storystorm ideas each month and fleshing them out until one begs to become a new picture book. If you missed Storystorm in January, you can go back and read through the amazing posts on Tara Lazar’s blog. They’re so inspiring! Some of my favorites are anything Tammi Sauer and the month of picture book prompts calendar from Katie Davis.

      You don’t have to be on Twitter to participate. I shout out when the challenge begins and ends on Twitter and it’s a friendly, supportive group…but as long as you know when it starts, you can write a new picture book on that day and add your e-mail to the Critique Train Google doc so participants above and below you will be able to get in touch for your critique swaps.

  • Reed Hilton-Eddy
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    May 21, 2021 at 11:32 PM

    Hey, I’m not clear how I send my story for critique and when do I receive the other person’s story to critique

  • Cynthia Tyous
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    November 5, 2022 at 10:22 PM

    How do I submit a manuscript to be critiqued?

    • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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      November 10, 2022 at 10:57 PM

      Hi Cynthia. I’m sorry I didn’t see this earlier. The PBParty New Draft Challenge & Critique Train runs once a month. During that day, you need to write a new picture book draft, then hop on the Critique Train Google doc (which is only open for comments on that day).

      The person above you will critique your manuscript, and you’ll critique the person below you.

      Our next event is November 17, all day EST. I hope you’ll be able to join the picture book fun!

  • Joyce Uglow
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    January 21, 2023 at 7:39 AM

    Done! I added my name to the list. Thanks, Mindy!

    • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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      January 21, 2023 at 6:32 PM

      Yay! Congrats, Joyce. Enjoy your ride on the PBParty Critique Train. 🙂

  • Debbie Meneses
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    February 9, 2023 at 1:53 PM

    I want to join this Critique Train.

    • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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      February 16, 2023 at 12:19 AM

      That’s great, Debbie! The February Critique Train started at midnight EST and will run through February 18, so you have plenty of time to write a new PB draft and hop on the train to give and receive a critique. I’m sending tons of good luck vibes your way!

  • Audrey Lavigne
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    March 22, 2023 at 4:03 AM

    This will be my first.. can’t wait 🎊

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    • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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      March 22, 2023 at 11:06 PM

      Yay! I can’t wait to celebrate your new PB.

      The Critique Train doors open in one hour. Then, you can write, write write…and hop on the Critique Train to give and receive a critique. 🙂

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  • Katie Snyder
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    March 24, 2023 at 12:43 PM

    I’m such a Twitter newbie I can’t figure out how to shout out DONE on your post. I managed to add my name to the train, though. What does the reply icon look like? I can’t find it!
    @katie_ktsnyder

  • TL Fales
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    February 13, 2024 at 6:28 PM

    I’m so sorry to bother you while you’re so busy with PBParty, but I have not been able to contact the person who is supposed to be doing my critique. I have tried both X and email. Any other suggestions? Thanks.

    • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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      February 13, 2024 at 10:32 PM

      Congrats on your new PB…and thanks for letting me know. I think I know who you are (since this exact name isn’t on the Critique Train doc). Can you send me a Twitter message with the name you used on the Critique Train and I’ll do everything I can to put the two of you in touch. 🙂

  • Teresa Fales
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    February 16, 2024 at 1:43 PM

    So sorry, I can’t’ message you on Twitter. The name on the CT doc is Teresa Fales. Thanks again.

  • Sheryl
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    March 21, 2024 at 12:51 AM

    I sign up for the March critique train early but I worked on it today. Did I start to early? I might have misread the directions.

    • Mindy Alyse Weiss
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      March 21, 2024 at 1:06 AM

      Hi Sheryl. Congrats on your new PB!

      You can flesh out your idea, do character sketches, plot, etc. Then start writing after the Critique Train starts…which was midnight EDT.

  • Deborah Morris
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    March 21, 2025 at 7:40 PM

    I just joined the Critique Train for the first time. I am looking forward to seeing how it works and meeting so many creative people!

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